[Report This]Date: June 06 2017 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Setting it up
I am not going to say this is a bad story, of course it is not. But I will admit I wish it would have remained as its original intent: with the girl being actually sick and them entering her. Unfortunatly I will say that instead, it took a drastic turn as oppose to the direction I wanted. But I will run on the saying "Don't yuck someone elses yum," as I know others may (and have enjoyed it.) I'm just saying this as my own personal opinion.
Date: June 17 2015 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 9: Liquid Tombstones
I'm hoping with summer that you come back to finish this. :) Perhaps even other stories?
Date: December 05 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 5: One Brave Soul
Well I tihnk you are doing an amazing job thus far. Keep up the great work!
[Report This]Date: October 13 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: Setting it up
Looking good. This story is turning into quite the tale of fun. I'm very keen to continue reading and can't wait for the next installment
[Report This]Date: September 08 2014 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 4: Getting Hot
Excited for the next chapter. Keep up the good writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Sorry for the late response and the late addition of the next chapter, hope you remain a fan of the story!
Date: September 05 2014 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Setting it up
Fun story so far. I'm eager to read more since this story has everything I like; micro and unaware, plus, according to the tags, couples and giants. Hell yea!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I feel like if I were to write multiple stories, all of them would be centered around voyuerism, since its my favorite genre. Becuase of that, micro will be natural to keep the voyuerism more realistic. This story was one way to incorporate those things, but I have many more ideas. So look out for my stories in the future if I have time to make more :)
Date: September 04 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Setting it up
Like the story so far. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! Glad you are enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: September 04 2014 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 2: Rough Start
Weird...but I like it O_o
Interested to see where this goes.
Author's Response:
Yeah this is definitly a story that is different from many on here, but I am liking it as well, which is good because Ill write more for it. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: September 02 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Setting it up
Good start. Interested to see where you take this
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
I am also interested to see where I take this. Ive had lots of story ideas pop into my head over the while and this is the one I chose. Stay tuned!