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Reviewer: Stehlampe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2023 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 5

I came here because I was horny, not feel sad. Why did you make me sad? Why was this so fucking good T.T

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2017 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 5

And now I’ve read it to the end.  Tears in my eyes, literally.  Such a remarkable story.  So simple on it’s surface, but so complex.  Ethically, emotionally. 

It shows some real sophistication how you left so much unresolved, unanswered.  It makes me wish we had literary discussion groups for size fans. 

The questions of Carl’s support for Alani from his hospital bed.  Did he not confess because he naturally doesn’t want to face the consequences of taking her food?   Does he plan to make it up to her and Kenji?  Something he can’t do if he’s fired or in jail. Is he motivated by the concern that if he is fired, someone worse will replace him?  See?  Simple characters performing simple actions leading to complex questions?  A brilliant and satisfying reading experience.  This story is an example of why the written word will never die.  Movies and such can never portray complex emotion like great writing can.

The issue of Alani’s happiness v. her circumstance, what a complex situation.  Slavery is vile and horrible, but she’s happy.  We fall in love with her and want her to be truly happy.  But by our standards, that seems difficult.  There is no Fyth sanctuary.  And she would hate life without Kenji and Lyric...and even Carl.  Would her happiness be destroyed if a loving family gave her high standards of freedom and dignity? 

And that ending.  What can I say?  Amazing, heart felt, sad and joyful all at the same time. 

And...time for the mean:  Buddy.  Pal.  Stop trying to write a southern drawl.  You have a tin ear, or sumthin, for the way country folk speak.  Every time you try to tackle it, it’s a disaster.  Just have them say “yep” a few times, maybe a couple of “ain’ts,” but leave it at that and write the rest of their dialogue normally.  We’ll get the idea.  End of mean.

There really is no practical need for a sequel.  This story hit the pond that is our genre.  Let it ripple out and raise the water level a bit.  Remember the ending of Jaws, how you wanted more?  That’s a good ending. 

That said, if you did create a continuation, I would not mind.  In fact, I suspect I would read it with great enthusiasm.  Some of these questions could stand answers, only to reveal new quandaries.  The characters and situations you’ve created will not sit still for simple answers.

Thank you for raising the bar of emotion, complexity and literary quality for our beloved genre.  This is certainly not your best work...you haven’t found that yet.  Which is good new; it gives us something to look forward to.

Peace

pix

PS.  You need a hook for a sequel?  The farm is working out well.  Kenji becomes an important local figure and the fact that he’s smart doesn’t hurt.  When Kenji falls in love, the girl he loves is rich.  She could solve all his problems.  But she wants him to leave the farm and Alani.  And ya’ know what?  For all her assets, she doesn’t “measure up” to Alani.  It seems a simple choice...but Lyric falls ill, to a rare and expensive disease.  Can Kenji science skills save his sister? Or will he have to make an impossible choice?  Alani sees it as a simple choice, her happiness v Lyrics life.  But will Lyric even be able to live without the best friend a girl could have?  And what about Carl?  All against the background question- who really deserves the fruit of the farms success? 
If Lyric were a Fyth, Alani’s food would cure her in a heartbeat...if there were some way to...hmmmm ....no, that is unthinkable...the social stigma...or would the first giant human be an indictment of the practice of enslaving people based on their size?

Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2017 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 2

I don’t have the words to describe how amazing this is.  I’ve only read to chapter two, but I am in awe of your work.

Normally “Alani” is the sort of character I have a hard time getting behind, the sort of character you want to shake and yell, “Wake up” at.  But damn it, she breaks your heart in every scene. 

The story is so rich, with so many layers of emotion.  Every scene where she’s happy, there is an underlying layer of sadness. In fact, sometime when she’s joyous, it’s a reason for every person with heart to be pained.  It give the narrative a depth and richness that is hard to match. 

It’s pretty rare that I sympathize with a giantess, but you’ve made a huge underdog in her and my heart goes out to her.  She is such a fresh point of view also, so focused on others, she brings the characters and situations into focus in a way you don’t usually see.

Of course, your dialogue does that too.  It is also layered and revealing.

I’m not really sure of the world we are seeing yet, I’m not even sure we are on Earth.  So my mind goes to the Firefly ‘Verse.  But that’s just me.  But some idea of the level of technology would be helpful, to understand what is possible. 

Carl comes off as a bit of a stereotype.  In real farm life, guys who are cruel to “animals” don’t last long and usually wind up working with people; where being an abusive ass is far more acceptable.

I’m not prepared to invest in Kenji as a character.  Distant science types can wind up being the worst people.  Or at least their consequences can be the worst.  So, I’m not pinning any hopes on him.  He is, after all, still someone using a slave.  No matter how much she might see her circumstances as being improved, she is still subject to that disgraceful institution. 

A story that seems so simple but is so though provoking...masterful work.  I am probably going to be sad that there are only 5 chapters.

Peace

pix



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm always a bit surprised this story still gets reviews after being 'published' for so long. I often do not finish writing my stories. With Fyth, I vowed each story would be five chapters, so at least they reach some form of completion.

That being said, I'm tempted to write a sequel to this one. It'll probably be one of those things where the sequel is worse than the original, but I'm tempted nonetheless. Just haven't conceived of a good hook yet.

Carl is indeed a bit stereotypical. Kinda makes me happy to hear it! Stephen King never liked The Stand being his 'best' book, a book he published nearly 40 years ago. Similarly, most authors don't want to think they've already written their 'best'.

Thanks for the detailed review, pixl8ed!

Reviewer: frostknight53 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2017 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved this story, made me feel happy inside that she lived and got a family.

Author's Response:

Me too! I really ought to do a continuation of this. Perhaps set in future 20 years. Hmm.

TY for review!

Reviewer: desslok Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2017 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 5

This is some really solid and well written stuff with actual emotion and real human characters. This is heads and shoulders above and beyond your usual story around here.

Well done, sir!



Author's Response:

Thanks, desslok!

Reviewer: gtstory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2015 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful, touching story. Thank you so much for writing it, and proving that kindness and giantess can co-exist in the same story. This has become one of my favorite stories, and (to sound like everyone else), should you see fit, I would love to read a continuation with these characters. That doesn't mean you have to have them suddenly battling evil aliens or giant squid monsters. It's the kindness, and development between the characters that's been so enjoyable. I wonder, once Kenji graduates, will he leave the farm to pursue his dreams? If so, where would that leave Alani? Or do his dreams include Alani? A wonderful piece of writing, I'm happy it had an ending, and ended well, but should you decide to let us peek in more with these wonderful characters, that would indeed be a treat again. Thank you!

Author's Response:

I've got some ideas. Thanks for the kind words.

Reviewer: tank Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2015 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

wish u continue this story



Author's Response:

Perhaps one day. Thanks.

Reviewer: Evermore Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is by far one of the most touching stories I have read on here. While I feel like the story could be over, I really wouldn't mind see a continuation. I think it would be fascinating to see the evolution of Alani's relationship with Kenji, Lyric and Carl and even the nearby community. Also, the concept presented here of a 'giantess slave' is really fascinating. I know a lot of giantess writers have been exploring the idea of size not defining the worth of a person, but this is the first time I've seen it played in reverse, where the giant character is the vulnerable one. Pleaes keep up the good work. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback, Evermore! Life has pulled me away from writing, but I imagine myself returning to continue this story someday.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2014 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 5

Wait, the story's complete? It's over!? Noooooo! Come on, at least one more follow up chapter.



Author's Response:

The arc is complete, but the story is just on hiatus for a bit while I get "Luna's Ascension" out of my system. I've got some ideas for continuation, so this won't be the last you see of Alani and friends.

Reviewer: TinyMetalBox Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 14 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loving this story!!! Please continue. Pleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssse!!!!



Author's Response:

Lol. Well, since there is quite a bit of demand to continue. I might have to do that sooner rather than later. Thanks.

Reviewer: Sugary-Micro Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2014 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 5

Please dont tell me this is the end ; m ;

Ill kill myself if this is the end : M :

AUTHOR

YOU CANT DO THIS TO ME

YOU CANT

-sobs hard.



Author's Response:

It's not the end of the story; it's just the end of the arc. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: MrSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2014 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 5

I almost missed this update and am almost glad I did. I told you to stop making me feel not make me feel more! This is genuinely heartbreaking and sweet. I mean she even broke down angry Carl what can you do against that? Nothing. Alani's perfectly, sincerely humble. Literally just happy to be a service to somebody, anybody. Killing herself because dumb Carl broke his dumb leg! He can walk it off. But she found happiness and that's truly all that matters. Good work man. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, man!

Reviewer: ArtsyGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is astonishing. I absolutely love the way you write. It's wonderful. And changing the perspectives is always a great way to refresh your reader.

I'm so glad to see a story that's not filled with sex, vore and gore. This story is also unique in so many ways.

Thank you so much for this story,

ArtsyGirl

Author's Response:

Well thank you for the comment! Means a lot.

Reviewer: Rainman11311 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 5

Hi, Spookytaco.

Well, I liked that a lot. I especially enjoyed the characters.

Alani and her kind are considered animals in this society (even Alani thinks of herself in this way). I think the way we treat animals (even giant, intelligent, humanoid 'animals') is a reflection of our character.

Carl, for example, is a bitter, unhappy man, and the way he treats submissive, subservient Alani shows the kind of person he is. Still, didn't Carl say that Alani wasn't to blame for his injuries. Maybe Alani is softening up grumpy old Carl. Which is good, because I felt bad for Alani for being so naive as to think of Carl as her friend.

The relationship between Alani and Lyric (love that name) is really sweet. A child in that society would be likely to think of Alani as a great big pet, at best, but Lyric wants her for a friend right away. Again, I think that's a reflection of Lyric's character and upbringing.

There seems to be something brewing between Kenji and Alani, but I'm glad that nothing overtly sexual happened yet. That would have seemed odd in that society, especially in the short time they've had together so far.

Alani's sweet, self-effacing nature seems to be bringing out the best in her 'owners'. I like that.

I like to think about what would happen in future installments to this story.

Something romantic between Kenji and Alani?

Alani going from Lyric's reading buddy to a sort of mother figure.

Alani and Carl as drinking buddies?

Oh, the possibilities.

I hope you do continue this, but if not, it stands up as a fine story all by itself.

Thanks for the great read.

Rainman



Author's Response:

Wow. I'm humbled. Thank you.

Reviewer: SmallFrye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2014 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 5

This succeeds as a fetish story and as good SF. I could imagine it in an old pulp.



Author's Response:

Intresting commentary. Thanks!

Reviewer: Silent-One Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Way to clinch it, Taco!

Dropping the karma hammer without permanent damage (a nice touch), Alani's self-deprecation taken to its logical extreme, and the day being saved by the little girl of all people? 

You, sir/madam (Damnit, Drac's got me doing it), have real writing talent. If your depth of story were to combine with my friend's mile-a-minute rollercoaster of brilliant ideas, you two might take the entire world by storm!

All in all, a great story, and I only wish there was more of it to love. 



Author's Response:

Heh, perhaps you should suggest this friend of yours try his hand at writing. It can be very therapeutic, as I've found myself. :)

Reviewer: midnightwriter85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 5

shoo... that was a close one, I thought that when Alani raised lyric up for a kiss, that she was just going to pop the little girl into her mouth, and,... num, num, numm!

Naw, just kiddin,... that was really good.  I knew that something like that would occur with the mighty giantess.  Showing her honesty, and weakness; her undeserving attitude towards her own life...

Very good short storie, I like the way that you told it from Alani's perspective.  Not many are written like that.

 



Author's Response:

Lol, she would never eat Lyric. Haha.

It was a fun story to write. I like that not all stories have to be super long. Makes things more fluid to have a choice.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2014 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was gut wrenching yet uplifting at the end! You have to revisit them, I need to see more of Carl, Kenji, Alani and Lyric!



Author's Response:

We'll see. TY for the reviews, Nostory!

Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 12 2014 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ok this story is really special....i mean in every other story, no matter how much it is focused on gentle, the giantess would become angry when addressed like Carl did to this one.

 

Hm even if you the humans describe her beautifull, for some reason i cant imagine her like this.

 

But its a great idea for a story.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Beauty is in eye of beholder I suppose. :)

Reviewer: randomwierdness Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2014 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 5

*cries*



Author's Response:

*hands tissue*

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