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Reviewer: bailey69 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2017 6:54 PM Title: Don't be an asshole to your sister. (Part 1!)

I do'nt like transformation stories,when it is one sided it's not interesting,when one person is unaware and the other is that makes a story boring 

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2016 6:00 PM Title: Don't be an asshole to your sister. (Part 2)

Just found this story it's awesome. Hope you come back... How about an unaware foot chapter?

Reviewer: Halflife24 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2014 10:50 PM Title: Welcome to a Special Kind of Hell!

Wanting to know if I can add in on story bc I love the premise and could really fun with it lol

Author's Response:

Not quite sure what you mean by add in? If you mean making an off shoot or something, sure, that's cool.

Also, I'll fiiiiinally be putting another chapter up soon. Look forward to it!

Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2014 11:03 PM Title: Don't be an asshole to your sister. (Part 2)

Great story, I hope it isnt over yet. I like you Ideas and cannot wait to see where they go from here.

Reviewer: CaptainLevi Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2014 8:09 PM Title: Don't be an asshole to your sister. (Part 1!)

Shrink High.

Reviewer: mimiru888 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2014 7:59 AM Title: Don't be an asshole to your sister. (Part 2)

Keep up the good work man, loving what you've wrote so far.

Reviewer: ravenshead123 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2014 10:19 PM Title: Welcome to a Special Kind of Hell!

Still waiting for those foot chapters, Brosus! lol



Author's Response:

Don't worry, that's the next stop! If you want something specific, message me. I was thinking a foot or shoe TF would be good... ;)

Reviewer: Lupe Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2014 4:32 PM Title: Welcome to a Special Kind of Hell!

Very nice story so far! Definitely hoping he'll be stuck as Karin's ass at some point or end up as someone's food. Will they ever be aware of him?

Author's Response:

Don't worry, he will. For both of them. Full tour is fun! I'm not sure about them being aware, though. I think I might keep it as only unaware, since that's kind of the idea for this story... But I might do some aware stuff in another story if I get a good idea for something different.

Reviewer: Sugary-Micro Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2014 4:05 AM Title: Don't be an asshole to your sister. (Part 1!)

Oh god, this story is lovely, it's amazing and this site needs more dirty ass material, hope this is heading to more gassy material and maybe some scat, I think you should just do what you love however but for opinion or suggestion? Personally I'd love some more prolonged torture, he's durable after all lol. But i'd love to see him tossed into a pile of dog shit by the end of that hell, quick place to drop him off when you wanna end the story pft, but can't wait to read more no matter what you choose c:



Author's Response:

I know, right? Barely anybody gets into the nitty-gritty dirty stuff. I'm kind of having a hard time coming up with good ways to describe stuff because I can count on one hand the times I've seen it done well. Don't worry, though, it'll get dirty. And don't get worried when the first ass scene is over, I'll be coming back to it. :D Don't think he'll end up in dog shit, though. Girl shit is more my thing. XP I'll think you'll like the next chapter though, and it won't be long~!

Reviewer: newschool2626 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2014 9:16 PM Title: Don't be an asshole to your sister. (Part 1!)

I love ass play! I just wish it was with Karin instead. I felt like you were setting up for her too since you talked about her slightly sizeable ass.

Any chance he'll be visiting her ass next? Maybe Olivia's is just like beginner level stuff by only being trapped in her crack with her asshole. But Karin is like level two by having to take a trip UP her ass, or by her finding him and deciding that since she can STILL remember how bad her asshole hurt after all those laxatives that it was finally time for him to kiss it and make it feel better, or something. Just spitballin' :)



Author's Response:

You and me both. Don't worry, he'll be getting a piece of every girl's ass, in time. I'm an ass man myself, so that's where he'll end up more often than not. After this, maybe some foot stuff... Then he'll get an even worse piece of Karin's ass. ;) Good ideas, too. Not sure if I'll keep this unaware or not, but if not I'll probably go with that. Thanks! ;P

Reviewer: curttehmurt Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2014 8:16 PM Title: Welcome to a Special Kind of Hell!

More ass! more farts! and if you're down for it I wouldn't mind him running into some giant girl turds once he gets in her hole :D



Author's Response:

The full package, eh? Anything worth doing's worth doing with scat I guess. ;D

Reviewer: christiawi9 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2014 1:09 PM Title: Welcome to a Special Kind of Hell!

Chijinda is from "shrink high" a very good game.



Author's Response:

Ding ding ding! Cookie for you.

Reviewer: mimiru888 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 27 2014 6:50 AM Title: Don't be an asshole to your sister. (Part 1!)

Looking great so far, keep it up! Can't wait to see what happens to him in the next piece!

I saw your review on my story, thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Thanks for checking out my story! Glad you liked it. Can't wait to see your next chapter.

Reviewer: voredom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2014 3:10 AM Title: Don't be an asshole to your sister. (Part 1!)

Absolutely loved this chapter. You go as far as you want with the ass stuff.



Author's Response:

Will do!

Reviewer: ravenshead123 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2014 8:55 PM Title: Welcome to a Special Kind of Hell!

Wow, I'm honestly surprised...in a good way! This is the first time in a while I have seen a creative story on here. Looking forward to seeing what you come up with, hopefully some awesome unaware/foot TF action. Also, hope you update consistently and actually (cause many don't) finish the story. Good luck, I'll be waiting with anticipation.



Author's Response:

Wow, really? Thanks, haha. I know my writing's kind off kilter, but if you liked this, you'll love it when I get back into the swing of things and get to the fun bits. It'll basically all be unaware, really. Can't wait to get to feet, maybe I'll do them second... I'm already working on the second chapter now, and I'll keep them pretty regular except for midterms and finals. So stay tuned, it won't be long! :D

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2014 6:14 AM Title: Welcome to a Special Kind of Hell!

This is a freakin awesome story so far! Well written and it catches ones interest!! So far it's brilliant! I can not wait until the next chapter is up!! I'm into giantess ass myself and all that goes with ass lol. But I'm not into the whole "turning into objects thing" but you could just shrink him to a good enough size that would be perfect!! Anyways I'll be checking this site every hour just to see if the next chapter is up!! Kee the chapters long! :)

Author's Response:

Hahaha, thanks a lot! I think it's pretty clever myself, so I can't wait to get into the real content - the next one will be a very ass chapter, believe me. ;D

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