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Reviewer: someguy1900 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2014 9:17 PM Title: Crushing Defeat

Awesome!!! Liking it so far. My advice would be to give more detailed descriptions. More of her clothes, feet, etc. Also more specific measurements too. Her feet can crush a hundred at a time. But just what is the size difference is something to make concrete. Anyways. This is a great start and I look forward to the coming chapters.

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