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Reviewer: Tigernach Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2016 2:44 PM Title: A Girl and her Fairy

Hi there!  You seem to have lost your way... We, your fans, have been waiting months  now for the continuation of this potentially great story. The potential is here, but where is the story?

Please come back to your story ASAP!

Reviewer: Moonpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2014 11:55 AM Title: A Girl and her Fairy

Liking it so far hope you continue. 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2014 6:35 PM Title: A Girl and her Fairy

Oh boy, I don't blame Daniel for acting like this and Minnie wasn't helping either. 

At least Ellie showed remorse for her actions although I am very worried about how helping Daniel find his village will end, she could probably stomp them out of existence without even knowing. 

Reviewer: voredom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2014 1:55 PM Title: A Girl and her Fairy

I'm wondering if minnie's playfulness is going to get him into more trouble, or ellie's butt, that's be good too.

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2014 7:01 AM Title: A Girl and her Fairy

This story is very interesting and I love the way it is written up!! I loved the belch part!! And how she was drunk!! Also I hope you add some butt action pretty soon and maybe also some farts if you're into that if not it's cool the story is just awesome!! Keep it going and keep the chapters long!!

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 11:38 PM Title: A Girl and her Fairy

This is going to be an amazing story. Feels like I'm starting a really good book. And I don't read book at all unless I have to. Plus this story seems like the book that turn into movies.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 9:32 AM Title: A Girl and her Fairy

Well this seems fun. I love the fantasy setting, and multi-size is something that isn't written about often. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 9:18 AM Title: A Girl and her Fairy

Fantastic start. I really like these characters as well as the plot. Can't wait to see what happens next.

aaron

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 3:04 AM Title: A Girl and her Fairy

The fact that you're drawing comparison for the girls from two of my favorite cartoon characters makes them more interesting to me already!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 12:45 AM Title: A Girl and her Fairy

I like this story already! I especially like the "no-bs" attitude of Daniel, even when faced with creatures far larger and more powerful than he could ever hope to be!

As for the two ladies, I kinda feel like they both fall into the "overly bubby" girl arcitype, not that there's anything wrong with that. But I'd prefer it if there was more difference in the personalities of the girls. Right now they both kind of seem like the same character, but I guess it's still too early to say that...

Great start! I'm going to be looking forward to updates from this!



Author's Response:

Ellie and Minnie are definitely very bubbly, but you'll see more differences between the two as we go on. Minnie is supposed to be sort of a loud mouth and hyper (or, "obnoxious" as Daniel says), while Ellie is more laid back. If you've seen Regular Show, Ellie is Mordecai while Minnie is Rigby.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2014 11:54 PM Title: A Girl and her Fairy

I love it! Ellie and Minnie are so adorable and well...Daniel will warm up to them soon. Just asking, will you finish the Frontier stories soon?

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