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Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 6: Wet and Wild!

 

Glad to see that she's being a little less ruthless in her treatment. Makes me wonder though, if she can influence his enjoyment level magically, why didn't she do it before? Or was she too caught up in her domination of him to even think about whether or not he was enjoying it? Makes her a bit selfish if that's the case, what with him spending half his birthday in fear and pain.



Author's Response:

I will say when I began writing this I had an idea that quickly grew into something else.

I initially had a witch her husband and shrinking as s template. Everything else cane and still is coming from the seat of my pants. I have no idea what will be in the next chapter, or where they will go for his  birthday. all I know is that she will have him in her clothing or in her body somewhere. 

I guess what I an getting at is I didn't know she would manipulate his enjoyment when i started writing, she just did and I flew with it when I liked it.

But assuming she always could I can agree she may be a bit selfish. But then again she is big, impulsive, in control, and enjoying herself. I think impulsiveness plays more a factor than selfishness in her treatment. Thank you for your review, I enjoy them all even criticism, and it wasn't all ctitical either

 

Reviewer: voredom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 6: Wet and Wild!

Back of panties, most definitely needs to get more aquainted with her rear.

Reviewer: sILENTwHISPERER Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 6: Wet and Wild!

Foot.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

 

I'm glad to see her love for him overpowering the power trip thoughts.

She's obviously got a dominating personality, at least in bed, so she's struggling a bit with it taking it too far, but she is able to keep herself a bit in check.

Nothing quite as cliche in this fetish as the "you're tiny, therefor my love for you no longer exists" attitude.

 

Reviewer: Giantess_Lover124 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 01 2014 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 5: Shake Rattle and Roll

Two things, 1 great job and cant wait for the next chapter. 2 TURN DOWN FOR WHAT

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I enjoy reading them. I don't think Brad realizes yet what he just got himself into. Could the only tag in this story that has not been used yet in a chapter since he was shrunk be on the horizon?

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2014 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 3: A Reveal of Sorts

I like this story very much. I like the way you describe how she enjoys her dominance over her loving hubby.

I am looking forward how this will continue. Thanks for the story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the feedback, I will probably write the next chapter tonight.

Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2014 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 3: A Reveal of Sorts

Only 68 gigs?!  What a loser!  Talk to me when you get to the TB range.  Pretty good so far.  I'm glad she still cares about him.  She can keep him like that just as long as he's not reduced to the status of toy or pet.  I like the women as your whole world kind of thing.  She still loves him, but she demands his attention.



Author's Response:


Thank you for the feedback, I never really enjoyed the stories I read where the Giantess treated little men like objects and were in different to their health or life. I am hoping I can write the story well with her maintaining a moral compass that will clash with her desires.

Reviewer: Lost Soul Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2014 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 3: A Reveal of Sorts

Awesome story. Nice to know I am not the only one with this fantasy!

Reviewer: voredom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2014 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

Loving this so far. Any plans for more butt interactions? Either way, looking forwards to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

After the last chapter I don't think Brad realizes what he just got himself into. It is possible a certain tag that has not been used since he was shrunk, infact the only one not used since he has been shrunk could be on the horizon.

Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

A good chapter!  Probably some explanations are coming in the next chapter depending on how she still feels for her husband.  If she's seriously considering never growing him back, will she care and try to make his life easier and pleasurable (still treat him like her husband, only smaller)?  Or will it all be about her pleasure and what she wants (the toy/pet treatment)  I'm hoping for the first part, with a little of the 2nd mixed in.



Author's Response:

The third chapter is half written but I was interrupted by my wife and wanting to watch true blood before I could finish it. There is more one on one interaction and explanation coming snd done will be in the next chapter. I promise to have more than just insertion and sex, as great as that sounds. I have an idea of what I want but when I get writing I have no idea what is going to come out. 

Reviewer: Benton Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

This is a very strong first chapter, and I wonder where you are going to take this.

Reviewer: zumi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

Love the start to this story! I'm certainly looking forward to you continuing it! :) I hope if this is a gentle story that "accidents" occur in the future chapters. ;). Again, though, great start! 



Author's Response:

It won't be all gentle. Tempers will be lost, discipline and humiliation doled out. But there will be no straight up violent cruelty. And yes accidents will happen. Along with shenanigans. 

Reviewer: Michalecs Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

Seems like you've got a good idea here. If this is supposed to be more of a gentle encounter, a simple spicing up of marriage as you theme this, unless your hubby likes the humiliation this could qiuckly fall into the standard "I have no morals suddenly because I shrunk you." and I'd hate to see that happen with a potentially good story.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 Waking Up.

Good stuff so far. Sure hope he starts enjoying it.

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