[Report This]Date: September 29 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 19: My own foot toy
I do agree with the previous reviewer to an extent, there are some grammar/spelling things that could use cleaning up, and occasionally the dialogue can sound stilted. Overall though it's not bad. You keep things moving at a decent pace and use a good range of tags to appeal to more readers. Maybe try giving things another editing pass to help smooth over inconsistencies.
Date: September 27 2014 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrunk at home
the grammer is bad,and the spelling is off,the idea is good,but needs a good bit of work.
Author's Response: Where's the comment where I actually care
[Report This]Date: September 20 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 19: My own foot toy
Excelente!
continue...
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad to hear that my stories are enjoyed a lot, so much that they are given 5*
Date: September 12 2014 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 18: Working out at the gym
muito bom!
continua ...
[Report This]Date: September 10 2014 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 18: Working out at the gym
Muito bom !!!
Date: September 10 2014 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrunk at home
Hey ! :D
Just wanted to review to say that you're great. Really. I love the themes you used in this story.
Yet... Let me tell you that I never read this story or any of yours before today for one reason : you do not write the tags down ! Therefore, we can't know what's the story is about without actually starting reading it. And I'm pretty sure I'm not the only one that doesn't usually read the stories without tags.
I really think you would get a lot more views and comments by tagging those stories of yours :D
Anyway, really great work, keep it up, can't wait to see what's next !
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear this story is getting better in the ratings. I know that I've improved since my first 6 story's and I plan to rewrite those ones.
Date: September 01 2014 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrunk at home
Meh
Date: August 27 2014 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrunk at home
muito bom
continua!!!
Date: August 20 2014 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrunk at home
The story is doing well of adding multiple parts of the giantess like the ass, tits, and feet. I loved the in sock and shoe action and would love more detail and length with the feet. And I'm looking forward to the continuation of the story. Keep up the good work
Author's Response:
glad to hear your enjoying it
[Report This]Date: August 18 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrunk at home
I love the story idea but it does seem to jump around a lot and move pretty fast that it's hard to follow. With some work tho it could be an amazing story
Author's Response: Thanks but my style of writing I know won't ever be amazing 10 out of 10. I just like getting down to the action.
Date: July 28 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: Shrunk at home
There are some wonderful writing tools on this website if you wish to get some sound advice on how to craft great stories. You have the ideas, but there is much room for improvement.
The homonymjas have taken over your story as well. You used 'soul' instead of 'sole' and 'defended' when you meant 'deafened'...
The good thing about this, to be fully truthful, is you have a very large margin of better that you can get with your stories.
[Report This]Date: July 24 2014 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: Shrunk at home
Hmmm...
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