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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2014 7:56 AM Title: The lookout for girls.

How can the girls remain unaware if you're 'skunk" at the beach? ;-)

Reviewer: Jamilton Signed [Report This]
Date: July 23 2014 10:53 PM Title: Discovered

Ok now I made a final chapter. Sorry there's not a lot of my giantess cousin in there but I include a familiar character to the story as well as a new one.

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2014 9:07 PM Title: The lookout for girls.

Well, the only thing I really picked up on was the fact that here in the states we tend to use Fahrenheit degree in everyday life, not Celsius degree, but other than that everything seemed to be on point.

Author's Response: Ok fair enough I'll change it soon.

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 19 2014 10:29 AM Title: Discovered

Great story, it's a bit quick.  But it's a good story, would be nice if there was another chapter with his cousin.



Author's Response: Yeah I tried to but I try not to repeat everything the giantess' do and I couldn't think of enough to get me another chapter

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