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Reviewer: Giantess_Lover124 Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 7:26 PM Title: Charlotte's punishment

This story seemed like it was a little to rushed and maybe later in you writing career you can re-write this story and make it better.

Reviewer: Mobster Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 5:19 PM Title: Charlotte's punishment

Good for a new author, but space out the text more and correct the grammar

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