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Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2015 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 42

Great chapter, Maria & Dale will be like Tom & Paul in Lamptower!  I deeply tht Paul will have revenge on Carla (like Bill got revenge on Sandra in the end of season 1) I started to hate her! 



Author's Response:

Revenge is always possible, but we are nearing the end now!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2015 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 42

What happened to posting every 2 days? I was getting worried that you forgot again. 5 days feels like a long time, but I'm glad you remembered. :)

First off, I know Jerry and Vera will get money but will Carla get money too?

Second, I like how Jerry asked if the massages were cheating. Ha, no. If Sherri carried you while riding her motorcycle, then that would be cheating.

You said last chapter that this chapter will reveal the winner. And now you are gonna add a new chapter about something to spice things up. Hmmmm. Could this be the sexy chapter we are all waiting for?!! I hope so, Carla seems to be ready.

Back to the last 2 contestants, I thought about what Jerry said and how he talked about Betty not likely to have super tiny cameras in the tents. Well, it seems like she absolutely can, and probably did. She probably shrunk down the cameras and put them on the tent. It explains why at the end of the chapter Betty tells everyone to watch the monitors.

Also, Dale and Marie are doing something for the competition? A show? Sherri suited them up? Now this seems like cheating. Lol. Then again, I have no idea what's gonna happen.

Haha, Vera. She was so confident that she was gonna wake up early and get a head start on Jerry. Then she wanted to sneak a peak at what she hoped was Sherri and Jerry sleeping name together. Her reaction was priceless, and I know I'm reading her reaction based on your writing so props for giving a good line to describe it. "The blood drained from her face". Man that's perfect, becuase I can picture it. If I was writing the story, I would've said "Vera opened the tent cover and looked inside. She was shocked and realized that she was behind." Yeah, your descriptions are far better.

Now for Carla:

So she woke up with Andy, and we all know they had fun that night. But then when Carla felt a tiny person, I was like no way, a SPY! Carla's goons get revenge! Yes! But....it was just Hailey acting as a messenger. I mean couldn't Betty just drop a note or something instead? Was Betty really counting that Hailey was guaranteed to reach Carla, and also get her attention? Seems like an 'of course' that happened scene. I kinda wish it was like Tom instead. But that might get Andy upset. Hmm.

Yeah, what is with Carla flirting with Paul. In this chapter Andy is fascinated by Carla's actions, but isn't he kinda jealous of his treatment. (Carla's diologue was freaking sexy). Carla has been flirting with everyone. She got Tom inside her, kissed Sherri and stuck her hand in Sherri's pants and also wanted to have a 3 some in Betty's dollhouse.

So does Paul get to eat pancakes or does he just get to eat Carla out? Because I don't think Paul will ever swallow Carla's juices since it's like a dishonor to him.

However, Andy is going bananas with what Carla is doing. Squirting people with syrup, licking them, sucking them, making cutout a of people, and then dropping one inside her. Andy just stood in one spot the whole time. I expected him to get involved, but he just got a show as if he is like me watching episode 42 of the shrinking show (season 2).

Also, Betty seems to enjoy Carla a lot, even getting aroused by all of Carla's actions and ways of handling these tinies. A fusion of sexy cleverness. Betty's like "No not all all, I don't mind", but then her true intentions are revealed, "you may keep him" then she remembers that she wants to try it soon too, so she's like "only a bit". Yep, Carla has gotten Betty's mind twisted with sexy ideas.

For a second there, I thought that Carla would cover Andy with that syrup and stick him to her panties. Talk about breakfast on the go. Andy will be moving super fast while trapped with Carla and he wil get to eat lots of syrup.

Carla is so damn creative, mocking Paul by devouring an actual sized pancake that looks like Paul and then eating it slowly, which then made Paul get an erection! Ha, who wouldn't? Carla is a sexy woman and it's funny, becuase in my first review of this story in chapter 1, I mentioned that Carla seems like my favorite girl, and I'm so glad that she is a sexy, confident giantess who loves to dominate others sexually.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow, wait a minute! I now realized why you didn't post this chapter right away. I think you made a new chapter this week and decided to insert it into the story, so you can post the new one next time. That way in this chapter, you put in the end notes, something about a spice up rather than a chapter about the winner having sex with everyone. If you did add a new chapter, thank you! If you didn't, well I hope the next chapter then comes in the next 2 days to mantian consistency. (I'm just hyped).

Ok, now I can't wait for this next spicy chapter!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I didn't actually write a new chapter--I am just lazy in uploading, lol!

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