Haha, my guess was kinda close. Instead of a present, it was a shoebox. (To be honest, I got it right.)

Whoa, whoa, whoa! How is 5 feet tall that short? Some of my friends are a little over 5 ft. tall but they dont get strange looks. Harry Potter is 5,5. I dont think being 5 feet tall would gain attention by being strangly short. Yes, they are short, but not that short.

Wtf Carla? Renouncing andy's sexual partners and baptizing him with her vagina? She is not a priest. lol

However, Im glad that Andy finally got submerged inside Carla's vagina. Thats like an achievement right there. One of these next few chapters just has to be like a sex scene coming up between the two lovers. only thing in this chapter was the initiation.

Let me guess, was that game "monopoly?" Game pieces and dice. (Thats all i could think of at the moment.)

I wish you made an extra sentence describing which parts of Betty's shorts that she deposited the 3 men into. I wanted to see who was the lucky one.

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

lol the whole shrinking Tom and Hailey by one foot was an insurance measure to make sure they didn't sneak away. Also, I would imagine that people shrunk to 5 feet from a larger height would look a little off as compared to people who were naturally that height, hense the looks.