Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2015 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 40

JimBob, thats a fantastic idea and I think there is a good chance that is gonna happen.
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In response to your response to my review:

Wow! 8 more chapters! I thought it was going to be just 3. this one where where we find the winner, the next one where the winner uses the other contestants and the last one(epilougue) where it details how every contestant leaves the compound and recalls their memories. This is even better. The more the merrier!

With Carla back at the compound, yes, this is definatley much more interesting than the competition. That also means that she is fullsized for atleast 5 more chapters and it almost seems obvious that Andy will be given to Carla now. Its like an equation that is bound to be applied to this situation. Full-sized Carla plus 4 inch tall Andy equals possibly the sexiest chapter that will happen in this show. It has to happen, and I cant wait!

Also, I really wonder what that twist is going to be... unless that was the Hailey dating Tom thing, cuz that was totally random to me. lol

Speaking of Jerry having a disadvantage, the goal is to get inside a victory cup. well, obviously if Jerry and Vera travel together, Vera will physcially beat Jerry to the cup and she will be the winner. Last year, the 3 contestents were decided on a winner by the way they survived outdoors. This season is more like "the amazing race" and it favors fitness. Its just hard for me to find a way that Jerry could win. he doesnt have the pack, and he is not as fit a Vera. However, you have surprised me Benton, so its not always obvious. I did not expect Carla to give up that easily, but it gives her that full size that I always wished for. In other words, I would be surprised if Vera like gets caught in a bush becuase of the pack and Jerry wins. haha, that would be funny, but its very unlikely.

Lastly, the two day intervals between chapters brings back great memories of when this story started. Once again, im glad you are back.
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Back to this chapter's review:

Betty told Andy "Now you will get to do something very special in a few minutes". The key word is "special" because it seems that Andy having fun with Carla is kinda typical this late in the competition, so I wonder what this 'special' thing is. Will Andy be wrapped up like present and given to Carla? Will Betty tie Andy up to Carla's panties so when Carla gets out, she has a sexy surprise? Will Betty toss Andy inside the bath with Carla? Anything is possible!

Is Tom that horny? Or is he just trying to get into multiple vaginas before this competition ends, i mean geez! He seems more horny than Andy this chapter and thats not something that you would see everyday. I thought Andy and Hailey would have a fling, but since Carla is back, now I can put the puzzle pieces together.

Speaking of Carla, espcially since you visited her in the story first before catching up with Jerry and Vera means that soemthing important was gonna happen. Either Carla wins first, or loses first. The good news is that its a win-win! Im glad she is back and confident again!

So what happened to Sherri? does have a say in Hailey having a date with Tom? That conversation could be interesting, but I think sherri doesnt mind anymore. They each had sex with like everyone so its not a big deal anymore.

Quick note: I totally forgot the Carla put Tom inside her vagina. (I think he was the only one inside her). Andy was never completely inside Carla so I was wondering when you mentioned that Carla had two guys inside her, I only remembered Tom. Andy was never small enough to fit inside her. I may be wrong, but who else did Carla put inside her?

Typical Betty, Dale and Marie in her bra and Paul in her panties and claims that his position is "enviable" so only Andy can witness it. Notice the order and how Andy was last. He was given a show on purpose and that definately turned him on, but for what? Well I hope it has soemthing to do with Carla!

The dream: After the shower, Carla finds Andy in her room as Jimbob as mentioned. Then Carla smiles remembering that she was just that size a few moments ago. Andy is about to have a heart attack since its the first time that he sees her being like 200 times larger than him. Carla takes it slow, fondling him, and using a sexy tone to say how she missed him, and is happy to play with her toy. Then Carla sexily adresses Andy's size and describes all the things that she can do with him, which makes Andy tremble. Carla kisses him, and then slides him down her shirt and he is stuck in her cleavage. Carla takes this oppurtunity to strip and take off her clothes and she is giving Andy a show as she then is left with only a bra and panties on. Carla then sits down on her bed and begins to gently squeeze her boobs together, massaging Andy and he slowly is slipping to the bottom until his arms remain stuck in her cleavage. Carla sees the rest of his body dangling from her boobs and she begins to lie down on the bed. She squeezes her boobs once more and Andy is right below her bra above her stomach. Carla then gives a seductive smile and quickly rises, as Andy tumbles down toward Carla's waist and he keeps tumbling and Carla then pulls open her panties and lets the tiny Andy roll in. Carla releases the elastic and lets the fabric seal Andy to her as her vagina embraces its next prize. Andy just stares at the beautifl hole, knowing that this was his dream, and Carla couldnt wait any longer and brought her hand to her crotch and began pressing down onto the little lump down there, and soon, the lump was gone. Andy plunged down inside and ran a marathon in there was Carla produced numerouse orgasms and decided to keep Andy there inside her as she took a nap. Andy meanwhile, in the heaven that it was, he was getting somewhat bored and wanted to get Carla's attention. So he crawled out of Carla's vagina and Carla was almost going to wake up, but she fell asleep again. For about 20 min, Andy struggled to get through the elastic of Carla's panties and finally made it through and rested on her navel. Thats when Carla woke up and saw that Andy had freed himself, she smiled and wanted more. Andy was a bit tired, but reluctnalty said yes. Carla took extra measures and tied up Andy to the interior front side of her panties and tied up loops of string around his limbs so he couldnt get free. Andy didnt mind, he is now forced to experience heaven as Carla began to dress up and put on an extremely tight pair of skinny jeans on. As she put them on, she could feel the body of Andy hugging her, and she patted her crotch as if to say thank you. Andy was no upset, he was proud to serve Carla, and he never wanted to leave this position. Carla then rejoined Betty back at the compound where Betty asked where Andy is. Instead of giving a straightforward response, Carla sat down on a chair, crossed her legs and gave a wink toward Betty. Betty then smiled back. Its a great time to be on the shrinking show.

The end.

Man, I cant wait for the next chapter!!!!

Author's Response:

I enjoyed your little Shrinking Show fanfiction story, it was quite nice!

Vera and Jerry both have a chance of winning at this point. As you probably saw in one chapter a ways back, I do indeed like both SW and GTS so the idea of a male winner--or a giant male in general--is very possible. I'm not going to give any hints as to which of the two will win!

Sherri only has some control over what goes on behind the scenes--it is ultimately down to what Betty wants. Tom and Hailey are having a bit of a thing, but will Sherri be jealous or just see it as another part of the experience? I don't want to give anything away, but all three of these characters do return in some capacity during Season Three.

Carla is now large until the end of the competition! Carla's been all kinds of sizes, but a giantess Carla is the best kind of Carla, and it's fun to see her in form again!

As always, thanks for your review!