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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2015 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 39

At this point in the story, these group sex scenes are far more entertaining that the competition.

I love the insertion scenes especially with more than one person. It just makes these experiences more memorable to these questions.

Hailey likes being a giantess so I guess that's why Betty chose her. Hailey abused Dale, but he was like whatever, so I lost interest quickly.

I love how Andy just worships Betty now similar to how he worshipped Carla. He looked up at Betty as if he was asking for permission and that just shows how Carla has changed Andy into being obedient to dominant women.

I remember the days when Marie was all cheerful and she was tiny and everyone liked tiny Marie and Andy was jealous of her. Now it's the opposite. Marie is nervous, and Andy is confident and in this case, Marie is jealous of Andy, because do how he is taking this all in.

It seems like this competition is about money or sex. If u win, u get the money. If you lose, you get to have sex. As Antitee pointed it out, Andy would make a great prize for Carla.

Speaking of Carla, her pun was sexy. She wants to put people inside her, but guess what?!!! She has not inserted anyone inside her yet! Marie was close, but she never went inside Carla. Andy was close, be he was too big for her at the moment.

If the competition ends next chapter, I think there should be a bonus chapter where we get to see Carla full sized and Andy as 4 inches tall, and they spend an entire chapter! (Or two chapters :D) having some fun!

I would consider Jerry very lucky. Vera is a physically fit girl, and Carla is sexy and aggressive. I think I would take my point back that Jerry has a chance of winning. There is no way a man would win. It's a female dominated competition and men are just a seasoning to spice this game up.

If Vera wins, it would be like a romantic ending story where we reuinties with Paul. But will Vera use the other contestants to please her...? Hmmm. I guess not. It's not in her.

That leaves one option: Carla!!!! She is a sexy woman who loves taking charge and would love using the rest of the contestants to do as she pleases. Remember Sherri and Tom from last season? Of course u do. But when Sherri used the contestants, she spent extra time having fun with Tom. It's not just a coincidence that Carla has her little man destined to be used. Carla is going to reserve plenty of time for Andy and both of them enjoy it similar to Sherri and Tom.

I just had a random thought of what if a random woman finds Carla, Vera and Jerry In the desert and then keeps Jerry for herself? A sequel can start from that! I doubt that would happen, but what else besides animals will encounter this little group here? Anything can happen.

Maybe instead of straight up sex, Betty and Sherri can get a little kinky. One memorable scene from season 1 was Sandra tying up Dave to her panties with half his body inside her! I would love to see something similar happen. Oh wait, I forgot you already finished this story way back, but perhaps next time. Betty or sherry can tie up Andy to the front of their panties. I take that back. Carla should do that! Carla could use a sewing kit and tie loops around Andy's wrists and ankles and sew him onto the front of her panties so when she puts them on, Andy is literally forced to please her!

I wish this story was like a DVD where I could click on bonus clips and find sexy stuff like that. (Perhaps a bonus chapter) Hehe.

Great stuff Benton and you posted this chapter like 400 times faster compared to the last one. I miss your long chapters too. A typical chapter on this site would be half the length of yours. Keeps it up and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Believe it or not there are actually seven more chapters to be uploaded, eight if you include the epilouge! I agree that towards the endgame of the Shrinking Show the more interesting action tends to take place back in Betty's compound rather than in the competition itself, but the drama to see who the winner will be is still on. In fact, there is still one more twist left to be seen in the final competition!

Jerry certainly is at a disadvantage, but don't count him out just yet. Vera is the most fit so on paper she is the most likely winner, but that might not be the only thing that matters. Carla isn't quite as fit as Vera but she is crafty as well as stubborn--that could help or hinder her at this point! So the field is still wide open! Remember, there is still one final twist to come.

It's interesting seeing your predictions for things that can happen in the endgame and after the end, and I have to say, you are very close on a couple of them, though I'm not going to say which ones. There are a couple things that will happen at the end that will tie into Season Three if I ever get around to writing it, so there's that to look forward to.

So only eight more uploads to go, and I don't think I'll forget for five months this time!

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