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Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 07 2014 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 34

Everyone in the compound is so nice now. They all get along very well, and Sherri has gone from Betty Lite when Tom arrived, to a very considerate girlfriend.

Then we have Paul and Carla, who are just trying to survive Betty, and Dale, who is now a victim of both rape and domestic violence. I feel sorry for him. Let's see what they're like.



Author's Response:

Yes, we'll be visiting the "naughty" ones next!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 34

Man, I totally forgot about this story. I had to reread the previous chapter to see where we left off.

So the first half of this chapter, Sherri and Jerry had some kinky fun, and for the 2nd half, Marie was making a cake. That was basically it. :( Atleast now I know that you will put a lot of detail into these las few hours of these last 2 days.

Well, we finally see the giant male, tiny female experience which was referenced by the tags. I have a feeling that's the last of it though.

Jerry is right. This bunch has is so friendly that I almost got bored reading about it. However, Andy's fantasies kept me going. I mean, hiding in a cake for these giant people to eat. Wow, he really wants the thrill.

Not much to say about this chapter, except that I'm glad you are back. The previous chapter was posted on Sept. 23 I think. I hope the next one is posted sooner. The events at Betty's place are always exciting!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

It is interesting: I never really thought about it, but if you were to over-simplify the characters into "Nice" and "Naughty", you would have Andy, Jerry, Vera, and Marie as the nice ones; and Paul, Dale, Carla, and Hailey as the naughty ones. Makes sense and it's symetrical: two men and two women in each camp. Right now, all the "Nice" ones are in the house and the "Naughty" ones are eliminated. I didn't think about it at the time, but having all the nice ones together takes a bit away from the tension. Things are about to be shaken up, though!

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