[Report This]Date: September 23 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 33
New day?! Did we just finish the first of the last two days, or is the next chapter the beginning of those two days? If this new means the last day, then Wow, that's like 12 chapters in one day. Seems sketchy. I think the last 2 days are just getting started.
Hmm. This chapter isn't actually that short. It's just short for your standards. Most people write chapters as long as this one. Your other chapters are much longer for which I am grateful for.
Not much happened in this chapter. Marie and Andy had light sex. Jerry and Sherri fell asleep together. Carla, Hailey, Paul going to sleep as Betty uses Tom.
Since Betty took Tom, where is Dale? Is there a threesome? Like I wanna know what's going on back there. Haha.
So Hailey likes Paul, huh? Hmm. And Carla is kinda falling for him too. However Paul is still loyal to his girl, Vera.
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
We have just begun the first of the last two days of the competition. In other words, tomorrow (from where we are in the story), we will have a winner! It will take about ten or so chapters to get there, though.