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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 30

I remember when Dale and Marie voted for Marie to be queen instead of Carla. Also, it was Dale who convinced Jerry to vote for Marie as well.

Now Dale wants Carla over Marie, and now Jerry is against him. I'm betting Dale will be voted off next.

Now the theme is everyone wants Carla. Dale, Andy, Tom and Betty. If there is a vote on who gets to come back, it will probably be Carla, but who knows if Betty wants to have her "life of the sex party" person leave. Carla has become an important person in this competition.

Sherri just switched Jerry and Dale's sizes, just so she could have sex with Jerry?! That's something that Betty would do!

C'mon Marie. Just becuase Jerry and Sherri rhyme doesn't mean that they have some sort of special connection, haha.

Is Tom jealous of Jerry? I bet Sherri did that just to piss Tom off because Tom had sex with Carla multiple times now. Who knows? Sherri might get Jerry eliminated just for that purpose. Sherri will have sex with Jerry while Tom has sex with Carla while they are all inside Betty. Also Paul and Hailey are having sex too.

A decent number of spelling errors especially when you said 'relife' instead of relief. You did that twice. Just a FYI. Also, you said "Jerry cursed fuck" instead of Dale.

I agree with Jerry, i think it's a voting competition next. That maze competition is sure to make everyone a bit sore.

The only person to calm Dale down is Carla. Either Carla is brought back or Dale is eliminated. Carla kissed Dale, so he is kinda obsessed with her being with him. Also she basically saved him the win.

It's funny. Dale won the competition, but he is bummed out. Carla on the otherhand was eliminated, but she is have a great time. This competition can change you, both physically and mentally.

Now I can't wait for the next chapter!

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