Date: September 03 2014 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 27
This is the most interesting competition yet. There are good surprises, and all the stuff in the maze is intriguing and amusing. There have been all sort of wacky adventures.
I'm a bit surprised that Dale won. I figured Betty would have her sights on him, and women tend to do better in general. This is some nice variety.
Hailey, Andy and Carla have three ribbons. Jerry and Vera have two ribbons. Hailey, Andy and Vera will probably get through, leaving Carla and Jerry.
In the game: Marie, Dale, Hailey, Vera, Andy.
With Betty and Sherri: Paul, Jerry, Carla, Let's see if I'm right.
Author's Response:
I tried to not always go for what people would expect to happen in this story--I'm pretty sure no one saw Dale coming out first!
You'll see if your predictions are correct very soon!
[Report This]Date: September 02 2014 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 27
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I think the other contestants that will win are Vera, Hailey, and Andy.
i think the losers will be Carla and Jerry.
My favorite part was the rc car ride that Andy got. That must have been fun. Or when Vera was sliding down that rope into the fishbowl.
Seriously, this stuff is creative!
So Dale is Marie's right hand man. Hmm. Something tells me that tonight we be fun for them.
Didn't Dale tell Carla where the exit was? Boy, is she going to be pissed at him for winning after she gave him a flag.
Not else much to say about the chapter, but I know that the next chapter is the finale of this competition and I know it will be awesome!
Author's Response:
Interesting prediction! You'll find out very soon if you are right or not.
I'm glad you like the competition so far. It was a chance to bring a bit of fun and adventure into an otherwise mature-themed story.