Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2014 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 26

I love Tom's suggestion to Paul, that cracked me up, haha!

So Tom and Paul have their own surveillance room? That's awesome!

When Jerry said 'some game' , isn't that a Harry potter reference? When there was a maze competition in that movie.

Yes! Carla, I hope you win! Have Andy give you his flags as well.

Poor Jerry, "nice guys finish last".

Carla reminds me of Catwoman with her desire to control things and use sexy behaviors to get what she wants. And she's feisty! Did you see how she outplayed Jerry. Wow!

Paul is rooting for Vera to stay in the game. But what about Vera? She might consider losing so she can reunite with Tom.

I'm loving the obstacles. :)

I mean colored pencils, marshmellows, soap, and even underwear! Very creative, especially with the soap slide.

Marie is still the good girl she is. She didn't want to control the train that threw off Carla and Jerry. Now the question is, does she think Betty is at least sort of sadistic?

What happened to Sherri? She is probably still shocked about her encounter with Carla. Makes sense now.

My next concern is that after this competition, there will be only 5 people left! Marie and 4 others. I hope the people who will be eliminated get to return like season one.

I'm loving this competition. Very entertaining. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Yep, Tom and Paul are perched well above everyone in the maze! Betty's given them some abilities to control certain obsticals but not too much.

I don't think I made a deliberate Harry Potter reference, but the maze was the third challenge for the Tri-Wizard Cup in the Goblet of Fire, and as I am a big Harry Potter fan, there's a chance that this came through subconciously.

I'm glad you are enjoying the obsicals. It was fun to bring that sense of adventure into this story for this competition.

And don't worrry--everyone who is eliminated will be sticking around!