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Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 24

Well, I didn't expect anyone to dominate Sherri like that, but Carla did. That was fun to read.



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Woot!

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 24

Carla played with Betty's toys without permission. That's a no-no!



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Damn right!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 24

Wow, I wanted Carla and Andy to stay together, but it definately looks like that wont happen for a while. (Unless Carla kidnaps Andy and uses him, which would be awesome!)

I hope Carla grows back for the competition.

Wow, Carla is a master of sexy moves with guys and girls! She embarresses Sherri so bad that Sherri had to shrink Carla. Haha.

We are nearing the midway point of this story, and this show is very odd at the moment. I mean, I cant really tell who is friends with who anymore.

Its interesting how Carla was suspected to be queen, but now she seems to be the outcast. I also feel bad for her since both Andy and Marie have betrayed her.

I thought Andy wouldnt mind getting snatched up by Carla. She wont really torture him, but if she does it will be sexual torture and Andy will probably enjoy it.

Carla wants to have sexy fun every night. Since she lost Andy, she got Tom, and when she lost Tom, she wanted Sherri. I hope trying to get Sherri wasnt an act of desperation. Carla seems like the hottest girl on the show in my opinion. She will get someone, but who?

If the next chapter is the competition, then how will Andy participate? He is too small, or will Sherri enlarge him for the competition?

Next chapter is chapter 25, halftime of this show. I cant wait!

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