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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 21

Hmmm. That sex scene ended quickly, im glad Andy enjoyed it.

At first, i felt bad for Marie in this chapter, but then i felt glad for her. Since Marie is comfortable with naked people, perhaps she can have a threesome with Jerry and Dale.

Paul is doomed, end of story. haha.

Vera and Hailey have a mini alliance, but i don think it will matter much.

I for sure thought Carla was going to be queen, but Jerry and Dale's new alliance certainly changed that.

Marie would be a great leader. She is that natural caring type of person.

Ha, what is wrong with Hailey? She abuses her lovers and claims to have treated them well. lol. And Vera believed her?! Well i guess Vera agreed knowing that Hailey was her only hope.

This was a very long chapter, so it kinda made up for the delay in posting.

I cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 16 2014 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 21

I bet Betty is about to cause a turning point in Paul's character arc, before giving him back. Paul's arc has been about dealing with his dwindling power, and he's almost hit bottom. He will be transformed, or broken.

Reviewer: RyuuKaida Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 21

About damn time

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