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Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 24 2014 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 10

I actually wasn't sure how you'd do a half size sex scene, since it's not done very often. You made it work, though.



Author's Response:

It's kind of sad that there aren't more half-sized sex scenes on this site. While I am generally most comfertable writing in the 2"-6" range (like most on here), I like to explore the whole range of size differences from just a little off normal to very tiny. I actually had an idea for a story where the main male protagonist would merely shrink from 6'0" to 4'4", and it would explore how his life and relationships would change on account of his new size.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2014 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 10

Wow! Just wow!

A whole chapter of Carla dominating Andy.

Arguably the best chapter I read on this site!

I havent seen a writer use so much creativity in the positions that a giantess and a dwarf sized human could perform!

At first, I didnt like how Carla just asked him obvious questions, but now I realize that it was Carla making sure that Andy knew the kind of situation he is in for. She wanted Andy to know exactly how small he was and how easy it was for her to dominate him.

The best part for me and probably everyone reading this was the worship Andy had to do to Carla. As a panties fan, im glad you focused on the vulva most compared to any other feature on Carla's body. This gives me a hint of what is to come when Andy is smaller. :)

At this rate, (if the sizes are still the same), Carla might be even more dominant by using bondage. She could use handcuffs, gags, tape. Ha, she could tie him to her vulva! She was more dominant than I expected, and that is absolutley awesome! I can picture Carla wrapping up Andy like a mummy and shoving him inside her. (im not sure if you like bondage, but I can totally picture Carla using it on Andy).

Since I cant analyze the characters, I guess i will analyze the positions and methods of worship.

First was Andy kissing Carla's toes. Even though im not a foot guy, I always believe in save the best for last, so I approve of this.

Second, Andy was feeling Carla's legs. I would have never thought of this, but I like it. It sets up the good stuff.

Third, was Carla stripping down from her pants and panties. If i were the change something, I would have Carla force Andy to use his teeth to pull the zipper down, however, im not sure if his head could reach it. Andy couldve pull down the panties too. Next time, I want to see Andy inside them.

Fourth, Andy began licking Carla's vulva standing up. This was a great scene, becuase I can easily picture it. Then you added sexy details like Carla rubbing Andy's head from side to side, and for Carla to push on Andy's back intensifying the pressure. In addition, Carla closed her legs together! Now thats domination!

Fifth, I have no idea where you got this idea from, but it is freaking awesome! Carla takes Andy by his ankles, turns him upside down, and lowers him to her vagina?! Does any other story on this site have this, becuase I was blown away by this scene and your creativity!

Sixth, Carla talking to Andy while she is hovering over him when they are both on bed. Yes, im talking about her words. Carla crawls up to an exhausted Andy, and lets him know that she is in control. Especially with the servant idea. That was awesome how his only mission was to please Carla. She is sexy in foreplay and wordplay!

Seventh, Carla breast smothers Andy. This was fantastic, especially sucking on her nipple. One thing I noticed was that there was nipple sucking, but no mention of breast milk. So was there breast milk? I understand if it wasnt there, becuase I know you dont like piss/poop, and breast milk might be in the same category. I got curious about the breast milk becuase at one point Carla said "let you be filled by me". Either way, Andy sucking Carla's nipple was quite a scene!

Side note-Carla also said "Become part of me, be my fifth limb." Thats a hint for insertion or atleast putting Andy in her panties right? I hope so. I want to see Carla trap his body!

Eighth, Andy pleasures Carla to an orgasm. I like how Andy has to use more than his penis to pleasure her, but that is expected with a giantess. That blast of her juices must have been very powerful to little Andy.

Ninth, Carla gives a handjob to Andy. I expected a blowjob instead, but I suspect a blowjob will come by in the next few chapters.

Tenth, Andy sleeps on Carla's chest. I bet Dale and Marie are doing the same thing as they are sleeping. However, you teased me again. I literally thought Carla was going to make Andy sleep with his head in her vulva. Yes, you said "in" not "on" and my mind erupted with ideas. Then Carla denied it, but I feel like Carla will force Andy to do that soon.

Lastly, Carla tells Andy that he will be her servant even in the morning. This really excited me. Does this mean that Andy will be her servant outside of the bedroom? Will Andy sit on Carla's lap? Will Carla sit on Andy's whole body? Will Carla purposley fall down on Andy trapping him beneath her while acting as if it was an accident? Will Andy shrink to quarter size?

I guess I will have to find out later. Once again, I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I had a lot of fun writing this chapter (like 7 years ago or something) and I remember I couldn't believe that I wrote a single sex scene that took ten pages, though I've done it again since that time. I just really cut loose and went for it. Now that the gate has been smashed wide open, expect the story to satisfy its "X" rating a lot more often!

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