[Report This]Date: July 20 2014 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 9
Paul is going to be a changed man after this, I bet.
And I don't think Andy will want to grow after this. I can see him volunteering to be Carla's pet permanently.
As for the lack of reviewers, everything you mentioned is right, but I'd like to add one more thing: there's no moral dilemmas or philosophical and social issues to debate in this story. That's how The Titan Empire series got over 3000 reviews (Exile alone broke 1000) - a few people wrote multiple reviews per chapter arguing about the issues the stories present.
Author's Response:
Yeah, this whole show has put Paul into a situation that he never thought he would be in, and it's causing him to see things in a new way. And yes, Andy is just nutty enough that he might want something like that.
You are correct when you said that there are no moral dilemmas or debates in the Shrinking Show. Which is kind of funny, because a lot of my other work (not so much stuff that winds up here) tends to have a bit of social commentary to it. But I knew it even as I was writing it--the Shrinking Show is just a bunch of kinky fun. There is conflict, but it is all interpersonal stuff, character dramas. The only way in which the Shrinking Show can be thought about seriously is in the way that it is a character study; other than that, it is pretty much a vehicle to produce porn scenes--and in my opinion they are that much more interesting when the characters are developed. Even the plot of the Shrinking Show is very thin when you look at it, to be honest, though this season sets in motion many things that would make the plot of further seasons more complex. (not giving anything away yet!)
[Report This]Date: July 19 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 9
Aw man! I thought the x rated stuff will happen in this chapter. Well, atleast I know that Carla accepted Andy. I wish he was smaller though.
Speaking of x rated stuff, I dont know how large is one-eighth, but I hope we get to see some insertion soon. Especially with Andy and Carla. Insertion or atleast putting a tiny person in a giantess's panties is a plus for me.
It is Sort of like in Season 1, how Sandra had Bill inserted inside her, and kept him in her panties. I hope something similiar happens and perhaps with even more detail like how you described Marie's bath with Dale.
Now lets analyze the sizes.
Giantesses-Marie, Carla.
The alliance of Andy, Carla, and Marie almost voted for the same positions so it wasnt surprising to see these results. I think that since Carla remianed full sized, she knew that Andy helped and that is probably why she took him in.
Half -sized.-Hailey, Andy, Vera.
Hailey is still larger than Jerry and Dale. She doesnt seem like she is worrying much. As for Vera, she is worrying a bit. Paul, (her protector) is smaller than her and now she has to protect him, but Paul seems reluctant to let Vera do that. Then we have Andy who is loving life. He is about to sleep with a giantess, and all the women are either the same size as him or larger.
Quarter-sized- Jerry, Paul, Dale.
Jerry is getting unlucky. It doesnt seem like most people hate him, its more like the other contestants dont know enough to favor him. He still seems like the mysterious type of guy that no one cares about how they shrink or grow him. Paul, is tiny. He is also afraid of giant women like Dale. Kind of a coincidence that the alpha males are super tiny, and the guy who likes to be small is sort of tiny. Paul wants Vera's comfort, but he still isnt ready for a dominat woman. Dale, has been quarter-sized for how long? 5 competitions or something? Feels like he was small since the beginning. It would be amusing if Dale ends up being the one-eighth sized person.
Once again, another fantastic chapter! I feel like this story is too good to only have two constant reviewers. Just Ancient Relic and I. Where is everyone? Did Benton shrink them and put them in this story? Im kidding, but this story needs more reviews.
By the way, how tall is one-eighth? Which size is the insertion size?,becuase thats what im waiting for. I cant wait for the x rated stuff in the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Here's a quick little reference for sizes, in Imperial units:
Full Size: 5'-6'; 100lbs-240lbs
Half-Size: 2'6"-3'0"; 12.5lbs-30lbs
Quarter-Size: 15"-18"; 1.5lbs-3.75lbs
Eighth-Size: 7.5"-9"; 0.2lbs-0.5lbs
Sixteenth-Size: 3.75"-4.5"; .02lbs-.06lbs
Insertion is one of my favorite aspects of the fetish, and as such is going to turn up quite a bit in just about everything I write on here, depending on the size ratio. I just want to remind you that were are not even one fifth of the way into this story yet and we are still ramping up to the raunchier stuff.
As far as the lack of reviewers, I think since this fetish is so much of a guilty pleasure type thing (even when compared to other forms of porn/erotica) people are much more likely to be lurkers and therefore not as many people are going to interact through reviews. It is kind of sad, though, I would like to hear opinions from more people. You also have to keep in mind that this story is a bit different than your average story on here; partially because of the type of story (this is more plot-with-porn than porn-with-plot, at least thus far) and partially because it doesn't contain many staples of the GTS community, such as crush or vore, as well as little to no foot action. But regardless, I hope more people come out of the woodwork and comment!