[Report This]Date: July 18 2014 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
The Carla-Andy scene was a nice hint of things to come. I figure Carla will stay big for awhile while Andy gets smaller, so that they can get up to some crazy stuff.
The Marie-Dale scene was a good gentle giantess moment, a good way of fleshing out Marie's character, and marks a turning point in Dale's character. It seems to me that it was the ambiance, and Marie's caring nature, that helped ease Dale into his new state.
Paul's new attitude toward Andy is interesting. He's either changing, or thinks he needs to put on a nicer act now that he's small.
You wrote Dave instead of Dale alot. Things like that need to be caught in proofreading.
Author's Response:
It's kind of cool how the Carla-Andy relationship is the thing that is getting the most attention--I actually thought this might be the case even as I wrote it. Also, I checked and there were 19 instances of "Dave" instead of "Dale" - how embarassing!
[Report This]Date: July 18 2014 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
Im glad you like my analysis. It also helps me remember what each character is dealing with. Well, here goes another one. Lets start with the giants.
Carla didnt do much in this chapter except enjoy her full size. She also used Andy's interest in her to gain his support, forcefully. I like her reaction to Andy's approach which makes me think that she will sleep with him, but force Andy to worship her. It would be fantastic if Andy shrinks to quarter size, so Carla can literally dominate him on a new level.
Hailey doesnt mind small people going agasint her, but i dont think she will forgive just anyone. Hailey is using Jerry as Carla is using Andy. "Do what I say, and I will dominate you sexually" -Carla and Hailey. Andy and Jerry reply "I love a dominating giantess!"
Paul is still fearful of the two giant women, but he still has a comforting Vera. His fear of giant women seemed to stop him from humiliating Dale as well.
Vera has Paul at her side. She is also fond of Jerry. I see a potential alliance forming.
Andy got so lucky. Carla forgave him, but on one condition; she's in control.
Marie. If i see someone in real life doing something bizarre. I will think "its another Marie".
Also, about 1/3 of the chapter was Marie bathing with Dale. I enjoyed the detail you put into that. I hope you put the same detail when Carla dominates Andy in chapters to come.
Jerry lost Dale on his side, but strengthened it with Vera. He also got Hailey by letting her have fun with him.
Dale, the reason why you like Marie's body more is becuase she is a college girl. I wish I knew which college, but only you Benton and Marie know that, haha. However, I agree with Dale. A giantess girl that gives you a super bath and massages you is a win-win situation.
Im excited for the next competition, but I am more excited for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Another very astute analysis! Alliances may be shifting soon--or not, but I can't give anything away! Marie is definitely very free-spirited and will do crazy things like this if the mood hits her. Andy is in large part an audiance surrogate for Giantess fans--in most of my stories the characters react in more or less the way that I would expect normal people to react (with a bit of extra nudging towards the kinky stuff, of course), but the idea of Andy is what if someone went into the Shrinking Show having the fetish to begin with. With Dale and Paul, it is the Alpha Males being broken, a theme I've always loved in GTS works. Alpha males almost never do well in these kinds of competitions.
Date: July 18 2014 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
Dave sounds like a lucky guy, unlike Dale. Oh wait! They are the same person! haha. Dave is much easier to remember than Dale, right? (lots of dave at end of chapter).
Author's Response:
Yeah, it seems I put "Dave" instead of "Dale" a few times. This was a point in the story when the characters were still forming in my mind, but the Season One characters were still fresh in my memory.