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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 16 2014 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 7

Andy! What have you done!

There are only three options now for Andy tonight.

Option A: Carla breaks her promise and refuses to let Andy have fun with her.

Option B: Carla keeps her promise but has her way with Andy whether he likes it or not.(he still might like it actually).

Option C: Benton writes a random, but mindblowing scene which I hope is option B.

Ok next, I was surprised that Jerry got shrunk, but it is always hard to go against Marie; she always has backup. Now Dale might beat up Jerry if this is even allowed in this show.

Personally, I liked how Carla humiliated Paul for a second in the shrink room. Thats the Carla I would love to see more.

Vera seems to have gained confidence with Paul her size now, and Dale wanting a large Vera to humiliate Paul. However, i think Paul is more likely to shrink rather than Vera will grow next time.

Carla got her wish to grow, but now she has this promise she made to Andy. Does she fulfill or not? I hope she does, and perhaps she can be rough on Andy since Andy likes a dominant woman. Win-win situation if you ask me.

Speaking of Carla, who's lap will Jerry and Dale sit on when they eat? Carla is way too big now and who knows what happens if they fall in between her legs. The half-sized people currently are Marie, Andy, Vera, and Paul. Im guessing Dale sits with Maire, and Jerry sits with Vera.

Hailey is still a giantess to Jerry and I wonder how the night will play out for them. Her two lovers, former and current, are both quarter-sized.

Dale is tiny and fearful of giant women and giant Paul. Now he is pissed at Jerry. Dale could only rise if he is on a winning team now.

Marie never wanted to grow, but she was kind of forced to beucase of how the voting took place.

Paul is shrunk, got humiliated by Carla, but now reunited with Vera at the same size.

The bug take away for me is what happens between Carla and Andy. Also, im a bit curious of the fate of Jerry. Well atleast there is another competition in the evening before bed. Maybe Carla will shrink Andy! Anyway, I cant for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Yep, Andy screwed up! We'll find out soon whether Carla forgives him or not. Nice analysis of the positions each of the characters are in, it tells me that I succeeded at developing my charicters, which makes me very happy. Next chapter will be very soon!

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