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Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 13 2014 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 5

I can't say which team is more likely to be shrunk. Andy has a good reason in that he wants to be shrunk, but Paul has a good reason in that he's in for a nasty fall when he's shrunk with that attitude.

“Betty is…” Sherri’s face broke out into a knowing smile. “She’s something else, I can tell you that. There’s a lot that you don’t know about her.”

“What does she do with you back there?” Andy asked.

“I’m not going to answer that!” Sherri said.

It sounds like something's going on back there...

 



Author's Response:

Perhaps it's a little bit of foreshadowing...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 5

I think Vera's team will win. Then Paul will shrink and Vera will find his weakness.

Also, dale will grow and the tables will turn and he will make fun of Paul.

In addition, this water gun/easter egg thing seems fun. Little Marie is gonna spray everyone for fun. Wait no, i take that back. Bettey and Sherri will have their own swuirt guns and secretly squirt from long distance, freezing the comtestants. Thats my prediction.

As for the sizes in jeapordy part, I think that means that the losing group are the only ones whose names can be voted on in those 3 boxes. So of the four, one will enlarge, one will shrink, and one will get blocked.

You impressed me Benton. By the time i began reading chapter 4, chapter 5 was already out.

I love it! I cant wait for the results of this competition!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it! You'll see which of your predictions come true soon.

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