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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2014 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 3

Fantastic chapter and excellent creativity of the block box. That idea is awesome!

Like ancient relic said, I was anxious for some sexy stuff but im always interested in a good story.

You teased me like 10 times during the voting. Im rooting for Carla to be full sized and Andy to be tiny. There were multiple times where I saw that people wanted to keep Carla big, but then wanted her small, and I was screaming, "No! Keep her big!" Haha, i feel like an idiot.

Same thing with Andy. I wanted him shrunk, and many people said they wanted to shrink Amdy, but changed thier mind. U teased me big time with Carla. She wanted him shrunk, but then changed her mind. So close. Haha.

As for Marie, I agree with hailey, Marie is way too happy.

In addition, I have a question. There are only 3 cards pulled out, one from each box. The block box is only affective if their name is pulled from either the shrink or grow box, correct? And if the block box happens to pul out a card that isnt from the other boxes, it basically is the same as to not having your card pulled out, right? Well, thats what i thought.

I think these are the results.
Person to get shrunk-Paul
Person to get grown-Marie
Block-Carla

Author's Response:

That's right about the block box--it would only make a difference if the name was also pulled from the shrink or grow box--so pretty much it only has a one in four chance of effecting things.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 10 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

@Benton: Funny that you mentioned the chart. Sometimes I had to think to remember who was large and who was small, so it would actually be a good idea to add reminders, whether charts or brief mentions.



Author's Response:

hmm, I could include a brief guide in the author's notes if that helps.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 3

Tune in next time.

 

Same Betty time, Same Betty channel.



Author's Response:

Damn right!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 10 2014 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 3

Current status:

Big: Paul, Andy, Vera, Carla
Small: Dale, Jerry, Hailey, Marie

Next chapter. Yes, I counted:

Big: Andy, Vera, Carla, Marie
Small: Paul, Dale, Jerry, Hailey

And the women get the advantage in the second round. This being Giantessworld, of course you're going to go for giant women primarily, but I have reasons for wondering if that's how people would vote in real life.

I like the blocking vote. The added complication makes it more interesting.

Andy may think Hailey is a little ditzy, but her interest in astronomy suggests that she's smarter than she lets on.

And do ramp up slowly! I expect my sex scenes to be a part of a proper story, and so it's good that you're taking the time to build up.

Would Betty ever allow herself to be shrunk?



Author's Response:

It's funny, because when I was writing the Shrinking Show (both seasons) I actually needed to have a chart to keep track of who was what size at what time! Hopefully it doesn't get too confusing for the readers as things get more complicated.

I think it is likely we would have more large women than men in real life if this kind of competition played out. This is largely because the men would see each other as competition and try to shrink one another rather than the women. The women might do that to each other too, but I think the women would be scared of men larger than them so they might go for shrinking the men as well, which would tip the scales. I could be wrong though, but that's the general thought behind how it turns out in these stories.

As far as Betty, she likes to be in control. Beyond that her preferences and intentions are for now a Mystery...

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