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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2014 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 2

Haha. How does Marie even live her life in college with that demeanor? Its hilarious, I like it.

Anyway, another great chapter.

I really want this situation to happen. I want Andy to be shrunk, then shink again, and again, until he is at the tiniest level. Then I want Carla to dominate him as a full sized person.

That would be awesome.

Little Sherri hiding her antics, I love it. She will probably have her way with all of them in the end anyway.

I try to categorize everyone by size preference so I can anticipate their reactions.

People that want to be small
-Jerry, Andy, Marie.

People that want to be big
-Paul, Vera, Carla, Dale, (i think Hailey too).

The next chapter will be a bit more spiced up, dont you think? Perhaps a little fun with some people?

Well, you already know so I will wait. Cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're liking it so far! Things will get "spiced up" soon, but as I said with these long-form stories I tend to ramp up to that slowly.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2014 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 2

I think Marie is my front runner for favorite housemate.



Author's Response:

Awesome!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 08 2014 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 2

Not much action in this chapter, but we got to see the characters act and interact a fair bit, and their personalities are emerging. I'm curious to see what kind of games this story will have, and I was trying to guess what would happen to who. Dale and Hailey may break up, or wind up like Sandra and Bill. Paul seems like he'll be a domineering one, and so will get shrunk relatively quickly. Andy and Marie will love being shrunk.

I'm also curious to see what Betty and Sherri do when the contestants aren't around, whether Sherri knows about the scientists, and whether the machines actually can make you taller than your original height.



Author's Response:

I can tell you that some of these questions are going to be answered soon!

These kinds of longer-form stories I like to ramp up to things slowly, but when it gets going, it's going to be pretty wild.

Reviewer: lilguyunderfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2014 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 2

good stuff!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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