Reviewer: antitee Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2014 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think that the most likely people to be elimated are Carla and Paul

 

Carla is being targetted by the other players since she made the mistake of playing the political game too openly, making herself a target and creating enemies.

 

Paul is likely to be eliminated since he's not well liked amongst the group, and from a narrative perspective his elimination would lead to the most interesting results without removing a well liked character. His removal would cripple one of the alliances and create an opportunity for Dale to reassert himself.

 

I really want Carla to win, but I think that is unlikely at this point. I hope there's at least a scene with Andy and Carla at a massive size difference before this is over!

 

 

Author's Response:

I think anyone who ends up on future seasons of the Shrinking Show would be much more cautious about politicing early, because that gets people in trouble as we can see!

I'm seeing a lot of love for Carla from the readers--I actually thought she might be the breakout character of Season Two after I finished writing it.

Reviewer: Altos84 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2014 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

I think Dale will be the first eliminated.  Either him or Carla cause they seem the most disliked.   As for who I want to win Vera or Andy.  Vera because I like the fact that she is athletic and dont think she would be a very mean queen or hold any grudges after the show.  Andy because I think it would vs funny since he doesn't seem to want to win.  Of course that could all be an act...  Otherwise I would like to see Hailey win but that's cause I like blondes. 

Reviewer: Moonpie Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2014 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like this story very much, i hope dale and Marie make up. Marie is my favorite so far, Carla was at the beginning but is starting to drop on my list.

I didn't know the titan stories were deleted from here and put somewhere else either.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2014 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

I know you dont take suggestions becuase you wrote this story years ago, but I would like to share with you an idea for the next competition.

The next competition is simply voting. The smaller person gets to choose a bigger perspn on the next size level to switch places with them. Then the bigger person who was voted gets to choose the tiny that they cant switch with.

If that made no sense, they here is the rest of my idea.

First we have Marie who gets to vote on a quarter sized person who she gets to switch with. She choose Andy since she remembers what their alliance has agreed upon. Marie is now quarter sized and Andy is now one eight size. Andy looks at Marie with gratitude and she winks back at him. Andy knew if Carla wasnt here, he would have fun with Marie anyday.

Ok, now since Marie has joined the group, she is not allowed to particpate in the next voting. Paul, Vera, and Jerry cast in their votes to either swap places with Carla or Dale. Paul hated both of them, but decided he wanted a smaller Dale. Jerry voted for Dale as well. Vera had a grudge on Carla so she voted for Carla.

Dale was voted to shrink to quarter sized, but now he gets to choose who he wants to swap with to be half sized. He chose Vera so she could humiliate Paul. Vera is now half sized and Dale is now quarter sized to join Jerry, Paul, and Marie,

Since Vera just joined to be a half sized person, that left Carla to be the only one to grow to full sized and become queen. Carla clapped her hands excitingly and Hailey let out a sigh that everyone could her as she knew that she was getting shrunk. Hailey is now half sized, and Carla is now the queen.

The final sizes were Queen carla, half sized vera, and Hailey, quarter sized, Marie, Jerry, Paul, and dale. then one- sixteenth sized Andy.

Andy now looked at the collosol Carla and felt his heart race when he heard Betty speak.

"Carla would carry Andy to the house with you, please? Betty said smiling.

Carla took one magnificent stride and stood over Andy, she picked him up and cupped her hands looking down at him like a fish in a bowl.

Carla led everyone to the house and one by one they went to bed. Finally, it was just Marie, Andy and Carla left.

Carla's stomach grumbled which scared Andy a bit. "Im gonna use the ladies room real quick." she said. Andy wondered how Carla's farts would sound and smell like at this size. Carla left leaving Marie with Andy.

"So" Marie said smiling at Andy. "You like being small dont you?" Andy nodded also smiling.

"And you like it when Carla is a giantess, right?" Marie asked. Andy looked at Marie with wide eyes.

"Does she know" he thought.

"Oh I know what you like Andy. Theres no hiding that." she smiled. "Tell you, what. I know exaclty what Carla likes, and I think you would like it too. Want to try it?" Andy nodded again not sure what is going to happen but he was excited.

"Ok, wait here" she said. "Ok," andy replied.
Marie left and grabbed some tape, and a piece of a cottonball.

She returned and approached Andy quietly. Then suddenly, she put her hand to his mouth preventing him from screaming, and with the other hand, she began rolling tape over his body. Once his limbs were taped down, she let go of Andy's mouth and shoved a cotton ball in his mouth. Then Marie covered the rest of his face with tape leaving little slits open for his nose and eyes.

Marie looked at the mummified figure and couldnt believe the Andy was in there. He looked just like a doll! She grabbed the mummified figure of Andy and took him to Carla's room. There, Maire made a little present box and put Andy inside it. Marie wrapped the present with a ribbon and wrote a note that says "A gift for my best friend -Marie".

Maire put the present on Carla's bed, and scurried out of the room and into the main room. Carla was there waiting for her.

"Where is Andy?" Carla asked. "Oh, he said that he went to check on his things and that he will go to sleep with..." Carla interuppted her. "Sleep with who?!" Carla asked impatiently. "He didnt say" Marie said pretending to be oblivious.

"Ok, good" Carla relaxed.

"He was going to sleep with you, wasnt he?" Marie asked holding in her emotions.

"Well, i might as well tell you. Yes, we plan on sleeping together tonight" Carla said calmly.

"Oh thats so cute!" Marie excliamed, perfecting her role. "You two will be like the queen and her toy" she giggled.

"I guess you are right" Carla said, thinking about the situation.

"Well, i left you a little gift, if you wanted to prepare for Andy". Maire said.

"What do you mean?" Carla asked.

"Come on, i will show you!" Marie said tugging the gigantic Carla.

Carla entered her room and saw the gift. She opened it and saw the little mummified toy. She hugged Marie, and said "Aw, you shouldnt have"

"Well, have fun tonight, good night" Marie said. "Oh, and Andy will be with you soon, make sure you try that toy out first." Then Marie left.

Carla waved at Marie and wondered how long did Marie know. Well it didnt matter to Carla, now she wanted Andy, but first she wanted to inspect this toy.

Carla noticed that it was the same size as Andy and saw a note. It said it was from Marie and it also said "dont remove the tape, its for lubrication".

"Dont remove the tape, huh? Well, ok." Carla said.

Andy watched as Marie shoved him inside the box, his screams muffled from the cotton. His limbs were taped to his body to his sides and he could move or speak. Soon he heard voices, feminine, and then felt the present move.

Carla opened it and took out Andy. She looked at him directly, but saw that Carla couldnt recognize him. She saw him as a toy. Marie must have wrapped him up good.

He heard Marie leave, and now he was alone with Carla, but Carla still thinks that she is waiting on Andy. Andy hopes Carla will unwrap the tape so they could have their fun like last time. Thats when Carla read the note about lubrication.

"Nooo!" Andy tried to scream, but nothing came out. Now Carla wouldnt even try unwrapping him.

Moments later, Carla began to undress. He can see from the tiny slits that she was wearing nothing now, and her hand reached for him.

Andy felt himself being lifted and Carla planted a kiss on his head. "Does she know?" Andy thought.

Carla then began to rub the mummified doll down her skinny, but curvy body, and then her hand stopped right below her waist.

Andy saw himself moving lower and lower until he was facing Carla's vagina. He felt the distance getting closer as Carla's hand pushed Andy even closer to her vulva.

Carla then tilted Andy so his head was pointing to her vagina. She slowly shoved him inside and moaned as the mummified doll was like a large penis. She never had a 8 inch penis inside her, but she remembered that a 7 inch diildo was a bit small for her so she believed that an 8 inch would be perfect.

Andy felt his body turn sideways and noticed that his head was approaching Carla's vagina. He has always wanted this, but this time, Carla has no idea he was there. He braced for impact and he felt his head plunge into something like a soft mattress that was also pushing back at him.

Andy then saw one world dissappear and another one open as he was shoved completey inside Carla. It was a dream come true, he was finally inside Carla. Luckily, there was some air within the tape, so he could breathe.

Carla shoved the taped doll insider her. She enjoyed it, now imagining what she could do with Andy. She squeezed her muscles and relaxed, preparing what to do when Andy shows up.

After a while, Carla became tired and lied down on her bed, hoping that Andy would show up any second now. She continued to leave the mummified doll inside her to make up for not having Andy inside her. After a minute later, Carla fell asleep.

Andy was starting to become nervous. "Why hasnt Carla taken this doll out?" "Does she always keep little dolls inside her when she sleeps?" "Is this what Marie was talking about what Carla likes?" A moment later, Andy fell asleep inside Carla's vagina.

Morning arrived. Paul was first to wake followed by Marie. She ran to Carla's door giggling, and knocked on it.

Carla heard knocking, and realized it was morning. She felt something inside her and remembered the doll. She forgot to take it out before she slept. Slowly, she put on some panties and a bra and made her way to the door.

After about 10 knocks, Marie saw the door open slightly and saw the face of Carla. She was hiding the rest of her body incase of any other contesant.

When Carla saw it was Marie, she opend the dpor completly and let her in.

"So how was my little gift for you?" Marie smiled.

"It was great Marie, I really appreciate it" Carla replied.

"So where is it?" Marie asked, eager to know.

"Oh, um" Carla then turned her back to Marie. Carla reached into her panties and into her vagina and brought out the mummified doll of Andy. Carla turned back around to see Marie stare back at her in shock.

"What?" Carla asked.

Marie's face went from shocked to a smile.

"Take off the tape" she said,

Carla obeyed and began taking off the tape. After each strand of tape removed, Carla noticed the limbs beginning to move. Before she removed the tape from the face, she looked at Marie.

"Is this...."

"Yes, thats Andy" Marie began to laugh.

Carla then quickly ripped off the remaing tape and the cotton ball which stuck to the tape.

"Andy! Im so sorry! I was just..." Carla tried to apoligize.

"Carla".....he waited for her attention, "That was Fantastic!!!!" Andy began squirming in Carla's hands as she brought Andy up to her face and kissed him multiple times.

She put Andy down and he walked over to Marie.

"Thank you. You made my dream come true, I wanted to sleep in Carla's vagina and I did." he said smiling.

"Well, dont thank me. I just gave you to Carla. It was Carla that kept you inside her all night." Marie said happily.

Andy then looked at Carla. "How can I ever repay you?" he asked with tears of joy.

Carla gave him that seductive smile of hers.
"You have already repayed me. You are mine for tonight"

And with that Carla took Andy in her hand and the went to the main room for breakfast with Marie smiling behind them. Marie was happy for them, and so is TomSpeedy. :)

Author's Response:

Woo! I'm digging the Shrinking Show fanfiction! And you kept everyone in-character as well!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2014 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

Welcome back. The last one was good, so I expect great things out of this story.

My guess is that Sherri is the four inch person running around. What she was up to, I have no idea.

I've noticed some trends: Bill and Paul are both ex-Navy. Dale and Dave seem similar in some ways, though not identical. Both stories have a quiet, distant woman (Sandra and Carla).

When you say written from 2006-2008, do you mean you spent 2-3 years writing this?

Author's Response:

There are a couple similarities between the characters of the two seasons, but I tried to make sure the characters weren't mere repeats of Season One characters. And I when I said I wrote it from 2006 to 2008, it would be more accurate to say that I wrote it over the course of two years rather than took two years to write it. I started the story in October 2006 and wrote about the first 80 pages over a couple weeks, then I put it aside, picking it up every few months or so to add more, and I finished it with a bit of a final thrust in July 2008.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

My favorite reality show returns, curious about the mysterious tiny though.

 

Great stuff.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I hope you will enjoy.