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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2015 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 47 - Epilogue

I like this one. The constant size changes must make everybody feel so weird all the time. You must be mentally stable too. I wouldn't do it for the money either, because it's predictable that a woman will win in the end. Just shrink me to 1/8 or 1/10 my size and I will enjoy my time with the women.

Good detailed story. You can almost feel what they feel when they size change.


Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2015 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 47 - Epilogue

And it's done! When you said that things are going to get complicated for Sherri, I thought it was obvious that Betty would have a stern word with her and probably shrink her over giving Andy to Carla. I was not expecting this.

It'll be good to see Shrinking Show 3. Don't worry about length (long stories are good), and take the time you need to edit and polish it. I eagerly await the result.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2015 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 47 - Epilogue

I wonder what Sherri will do with Tv crew. Help them to escape I doubt, play with them it's possible. maybe  Sherri will convaince Betty to let them see their relatives.

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2015 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 46

I'd kinda think that they are, mostly on the basis of 'how do they know it won't work if you don't try it?' But likewise maybe they're right and it wouldn't workout....

I just  thought that maybe a couple with hundereds of thousands worth of dollars could surely afford to come up witha  way to try and keep seeing each other for a little longer afterwards before calling it quits. Jerry could have found a way to keep visiting maybe, Become a supplier/delivery guy for equipment or maintenance of the flat for future seasons? Some sort of business that'd ensure potential frequent contact, I don't know. I clearly became just too attached with the chemistry built up during their fling in the 2nd season ^_^;

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2015 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

I wouldn't be surprised if I saw "Giantess Carla" by Benton next week.

Summary: We continue our journey with former contestants Andy and Carla and see how their relationship is going. (Must read shrinking show season 2 first).

Size roles: F/m, Giantess

Tags: Creative, insertion, Sadistic, Kinky, Crazy, Insertion, bra, panties, more insertion.

That would be awesome.

Author's Response:

Without giving too much a way, much of Carla and Andy's story is already written. Whether I will post that soon or not is still undecided by me at this point.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2015 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 46

Wow, and just like that the season is over.

Tom and Hailey getting together.

Vera and Paul getting together.

Dale finally leaving(more like escaping)

Betty was crying in her room. (I'm kidding).

And wow, Andy staying 4.5 inches tall permanently?!!! I want a sequel of that relationship ASAP!

I hope the epilogue details Carla's adventures a bit. Last season's epilogue was just about Betty. Interesting, but now this season, Betty is an open book. These contestants are more interesting so I hope the epilogue is about them.

Season 3 should be coming soon, especially since you had a 5 month break! Haha.

Anyway, if you get bored or don't want to write about the stories on Wordpress, then there is always the story of how Carla and Andy are having fun.

But seriously, Carla should've put Andy in her panties, his real home. I mean, I bet Andy is like, "are we there yet? I wanna get in your pants now" or some other Andyish thought.

Short, but sweet chapter. Can't wait for the epilogue!

Author's Response:

The fact of Carla and Andy's ending certianly leaves the door wide open for a continuation. Once I upload the Epilouge, I am also going to create a blog post about the future of the Shrinking Show series and plans for the future.

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 21 2015 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 46

Alright, very nice end chapter there :)
I do believe that's nearly all loose ends tied up quite handilly ^_^

i'm a little bummed about Jerry and Sherri not becoming a long term item in the end. It would have been sweet if he could have used his thousands to set up shop nearby her place of work too but alas, pen-pals is still something :)

And Andy, that looky tiny fiend, real glad he got his wish there. Clearly he and Carla are the ones going home the true winners of this contest xD 

Author's Response:

Sometimes flings are just flings, and sometimes they are more. Jerry and Sherri don't think they'd be compatable outside the show, but maybe they're wrong?

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2015 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

ANDY, congratz you're doomed for rest of your life !!!!!!!!!!!! storyline wise it could be interesting bcz that open several scenariis like what if andy is found by an unknown. it could be an scandal for betty.  

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2015 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 46

"I do!" Like they're getting married or something.

I doubt Sherri was in fact able to keep that away from Betty. I know that Betty is not at all bothered by a permanently shrunken man.

Author's Response:

Things are going to become a lot more complicated for Sherri!

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 19 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 45

Alright, I'll admit that I wasn't expecting to enjoy this chapter as much, what with the winner possibly including a giant-Dale in the mix for the obligatory sex-capade...But I have to say, the way you handled every character and the consequences of their respective actions in this last bit really made it an enjoyable read and a good way to wrap up the show :)

Seriously, the results of Dale's immunity was by far the best surprise in this chapter. Bravo sir. xD


(On a side note, incase you're unaware and wanted a heads up, you have a little typo near the end of Betty's scene, where I think you meant to write 'Tom' instead of 'Jerry' )


Author's Response:

Thank you sir! I thought that was a fitting way to end the competition for Dale as well. And yes, sadly the story has many typos I never got to fixing.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2015 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 45

Man, were u drunk or something? So many spelling errors and u keep mixing up the names this chapter. Lol.

I knew it! Vera wouldn't abuse the other contestants! However I wished she used Andy.

Is Vera a virgin? I never thought she was but she sure sounded like one in this chapter.

I like the random Dale paragraph at the end. It's like you knew that I was gonna ask "Hey, what about Dale?"

I like how Sherri like dumped Tom for Jerry. Betty is like "more toys for me!" Vera gives the contestants to her, and Sherri leaves Tom with Betty.

Very good ending. Almost happily ever after type. I kept smiling and my heart felt warm when Paul and Vera got united.

Carla vs Andy 2.0 next chapter (I hope).

I can't wait chapter 46!

Author's Response:

Lol, it is entirely possible I was drunk, I don't remember, I wrote that chapter nearly seven years ago now! I also didn't spell check it back then--my modern works are much more clean when it comes to mechanics like that.

Vera isn't a virgin, but she is a "giantess"-virgin, and also is concious of hurting Paul, so that's where her awkwardness comes from.

And yes I had to mention Dale because otherwise people would wonder about him.

Only one more chapter!

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2015 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 44

Dangit that means giant Dale next chapter >_>;

Ah well, gg to Vera and a good try on Jerry's part, he was such a nice guy it's so sad T_T
But he'll hopefully get his happy ending with Sherri at least, there's the silver-lining ^_^; 

Author's Response:

It's really interesting to see the divided response on the winner!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 44

Yes! Vera wins!

Serves justice for Jerry almost getting carried to victory. (Literally by Marie carrying him).

Vera is always shown working hard by doing push-ups and various workouts, but all Jerry did was have sex with Sherri to work his body.

Finally Dale is useful at something. He had enough information for Vera to use.

In contrast Marie was a physical boost by being bigger and her longer legs made her every step that much more faster.

I'm glad Vera won, she deserved it more than Jerry. This sends a great message to this watching the shrinking show. Hard work pays off, and Vera deck agley worked for it.

Also, I love how it was never obvious who would win until the end. I mean of course Jerry would think "cup-kitchen", it felt like that wasn't that obvious since Betty could've hid it anywhere and he just happens to guess it right for a stupid reason. Lol

Ok, so now it begs the question whether Vera will have sex with everyone. Even though I love the Carla-Andy relationship, I would love to see Vera stick Andy inside her and force Carla to watch. I don't know why, but I think that will be a great case for revenge and humiliation. Then of course, I want Carla to have Andy again.

However, if Vera refuses to have sex with everyone, does Jerry get the next privilege of having sex with everyone? And if not him, will Carla? I won't go beyond that since we all know Carla will accept it.

So 2 more chapters plus the epilogue! I can't wait, especially for the next chapter!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

I gotta say, Jerry not winning is a definite upset here.


See! I'm not alone !

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 44

I gotta say, Jerry not winning is a definite upset here.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh come on Benton, jerry should've won this plus Marie is sweet girl and deserved immunity, great scenes tough. just hope the next shows will al least a male (good hearted) winner! 

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2015 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 43

Dang this is one intense looking finale :)
I honestly can't tell who I think it might be as it could go either way thanks to Vera's short-cut ^_^

Although I'm probably still rooting for Jerry, even more so now if it means that Dale won't be immune from the final night's events etc. I was partially on Vera's side to begin with (while equally conflicted with rooting for Jerry) but the moment her assistant was revealed to be Dale, that pretty much sealed my rooting support for Jerry xD

Out of all the male contestants that'd deserve to be full sized over the others, it's definitely him. So I'm really hoping that Jerry's headstart was sufficient to give him enough of a boost to counter Vera's shortcut :D 

Author's Response:

The two of them are in about equal position at this moment so it could go either way!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2015 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 43

What a plot twist! For a second, I also thought that Carla was immune, but then there would be too many immune people.

I'm too lazy to write a long review, so I'm just gonna cover the nuts and bolts.

For some reason, I can't picture Vera or Jerry having sex with all these people. They both seem innocent.

I think Vera will win, but she won't have sex with everyone. She probably will just put Andy inside her to make Carla mad and leave everyone else alone.

Why does Betty keep repeating that: "whoever opens the box will have you for the night"? It seems as though Betty is gonna open it, and say "Surprise!!!! I get you all!" Or some other random idea.

Maybe Vera wins, refuses to have her fun, so Betty takes over. However, I'm kinda bored of Betty having her fun, so I don't want that to happen.

Ok, I think Marie physically carrying Jerry is cheating, like wow, talk about being carried to victory.

I also feel like Jerry never did much in this competition. He showed up on day 1, acted innocent, had sex with Sherri, had MORE sex with Sherri, and now a hot girl carries him to the cup for a million dollars? Wtf!

Ok, I got carried away with my review. It wasn't supposed to be this long, but I couldn't resist mentioning these things.

Well, I can't wait for the next chapter! (I still can't picture Jerry or Vera having sex with all the tinies. I'm expecting another plot twist.)

Author's Response:

Well, as we know, cheating has always been a part of the Shrinking Show!

The winner of the show could decline having all seven other contestants for sex--but the option is still there!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2015 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

GO Jerry, go jerry, im gender equality a woman won last season let a cool guy like jerry this!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Could happen!

Reviewer: Nhencjnde Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2015 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi. It´s me again.

Volví a tu blog para ver si había alguna clase de adición referente a tus futuros proyectos. No quiero sonar ansioso ni desesperado, pero mentiria si contradiciere esos sentimientos; sobro todo de tus proyectos principales. Así que, me tope con la ídea que tienes para una historia, sobre camioneros espaciales y maquinas dispensadoras de personas. Sinceramente, para mi, no es algo que esperaría leer con entuciasmo desde la perspectiva que piensas manejar la trama: un camionero enamorado de una mujer pequeña, quien esta enamorada de un hombre de su mismo tamaño. Como escribes, habra algunas mujeres camioneras, pero esto tampoco me incitaria a leerla con febril emoción. Sin embargo, es una idea interesante y estoy seguro que habra gente que disfrutara de ella. Inclusive, puede ser que la trama sea lo que me atrapé. Solo dire que decides dar carta blanca para comenzar a escribirla, una vez que la publiques, la leeré. Con posible ecepticismo, pero como he dicho antes, soy de mente abierta y no la juzgare antes de haber leido parte de ella.

Si mi comentario te ofendio de algun modo, de antemano te ofresco una disculpa.

Sin nada más que añadir, me despido.

Bye :)

Author's Response:

It always makes me happy when people check my blog! The "Space Trucker" idea was something that just occurred to me a few days ago. I dowbt I'll be working on the idea soon, but who knows? My interests shift quite a bit and I'm not sure one moment from the next what I want my main project to be. Yes, it will be a little different as the story will be mostly M/f rather than F/m, but I like to explore that end of the fetish as well from time to time.

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