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Reviewer: Footsteps Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 11 2014 12:59 AM Title: Part 1

Please update! I can't wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2014 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 12

The most recent chapter was great! The interaction between Megan and Matt was perfectly executed, and I love that she's not verbally abusing him. She's barely speaking to him at all, letting her actions speak for her.

I like that you're mixing it up with her too, having her do more than just feet stuff.

Reviewer: Mobster Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 4:28 PM Title: Part 1

Love this story! And I love you keep updating it!

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11 2014 12:38 PM Title: Part 1

I feel like this is totally going to backfire on Molly somehow. Or rather, it should backfire on her because of how reckless an idea it is.

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 10

great story so far

Reviewer: Footsteps Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2014 10:58 AM Title: Part 1

I disagree with Jimbob. It's fun to think that, waiting under the surface of any female friend is a desire to have their feet worshipped by a tiny man!

I love everything you've been doing with this story. Especially the Molly perspective and how it just feels so right for her. Very excited to see what the punishment is going to be!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2014 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 6

This is great. Hope to see more.

aaron

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2014 5:37 PM Title: Part 1

Like the physical interactions so far, but the emotional is little odd. A good friend suddenly turning into a tormenter is a little weird.

That being said, I'm hoping for some kind of moment where she accidently causes him some serious harm and suddenly realizes how dangerous her fun is for him. Something like heat stroke when left in her shoe, or accidently putting too much pressure on him and seriously bruising or maybe even breaking something.

But then I enjoy those kind of epiphany moments in stories.



Author's Response:

yea it didnt feel perfect writing it, but I guess the idea is shes completely drunk with power.

Reviewer: dudeduderson2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 4

Very good stuff, hope to see more!

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2014 5:16 PM Title: Part 1

Neat!

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