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Reviewer: carloss987 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2014 7:12 AM Title: Yummy!

So far this has been one of the best stories I have seen on this site, please continue to update this story. I'm loving the unaware element you have gone for and hope it stays throughout the whole story.



Author's Response:

Don't worry this story will continue and remain an unaware story. I just need to fix some of the chapters I wrote and the lack of reviews makes me feel I can take my time. So thank you for the review and I wiil try to get the next chapter out soon.

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