Date: September 21 2014 3:11 PM Title: Terror Beneath Her Feet
Can't wait for tommorrow
Author's Response:
I hope it will be done by monday LOL, still working out the kinks of the chapter.
Date: July 29 2014 11:22 PM Title: Terror Beneath Her Feet
Yea, bud, look. I know it's a technique used by writers, but it's also a technique that's very, very, outdated. When I see all caps I think of an immature internet argument run by 12 year olds smashing at a keyboard. I don't think ginormous.
Descriptions speak louder then word formatting. Mentioning how her voice echoed, boomed, etc. is a lot less grating then writing in capitols.
Author's Response:
I am sorry that is the way you depict the all caps use, but I will use it until I receive more complaints, so far I have gotten none concerning this subject and it doesn't take away from the story in any way. I do appreciate your stand on the subject and will take it into account when using the all caps becomes a nuisance to the other readers and decide to reconsider the use of all caps for the effect I am trying to produce, but so far I had no other complaints and I wouldn't want to change something based on an individual's pet peeve. Yet I am glad you told me about the technique being outdated and I appreciate your advice, but I will stick to what has been working for me til this point until I find the technique serves no purpose or is annoying.
if you for any reason continue this convo, plz message me, I get excited when I get reviews and will be disappointed to see the review is only in reply to this convo.
Date: July 29 2014 5:47 AM Title: Terror Beneath Her Feet
Okay, look, we get she's big.
Don't capatalize her words.
Author's Response:
Making her words in caps is a technique that i have seen done in many successful stories. It is not done simply because she is big, but to place an emphasis on the loudness of her voice to the people who are tiny. Sorry if it's not too your liking, but I will use the caps.
[Report This]Date: June 27 2014 3:20 PM Title: Terror Beneath Her Feet
I'm loving this story! The first chapter was a little slow, but it has really picked up. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for this review, I am glad to hear that the pace is going just the way I planned. I hope you continue reading because this story will continue with relentless giantess action through out.