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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2014 1:47 AM Title: 'Impetuosity'

Haha! My guess was right! It was Carycomic and Gadget!

Man, I can't wait to see what Zena does with Max. At the end of the last chapter, she said that she was going to give him to the researchers, and I hope she changes her mind. :)

Man, I like Jane. Keep that sexy feeling alive. She had those men hanging on those straps. She doesn't even know that Marie brought two more, we'll not yet. :)

Will Julianne be back? she was awesome! If not, I hope Zena does some sexy things similar to Julianna.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Yep, I think you were right!  Those two just keep popping up in this tale.  I wonder what Marie will do about Ajet shooting her in the ankle?  Well, I guess we'll find out a few chapters down the road.  (Maybe she'll just give him to her mother to play with,... Jane's been wanting to have one all to herself,,,)  hee hee..

Oh Yea, Poor Max,... he's gonna have to work now!  Zena likes her toes to be perfect when she's on camera, and wearing her favorite, 'Opened toed' high heels, while doing the news.  And, she also has a thing about 'unwanted' body hair,... I assume that he'll have to take care of that too!

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Next chapter will be a 'flashback' told from 'Billy Bob's' P.O.V., including a narrative of everthing that happened to him, while he was enslaved by Valerie. (The Beauty Salon Manager,).  I'm going to use that as a way to touch on some of the other fetishes that I normally would never include in a story like this,...

Some are just plain disgusting, so be forewarned!  But, they we all be told from Billy's memory of his time spent working for the giantess at the Salon.  It's going to be a long one, and it will touch on several different fetishes....

Not all of them are strange though,... just, very different?

Thanks Tom!  Next chapter, should be a few days away, I'm not sure yet...

 

 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2014 12:12 PM Title: 'Impetuosity'

I think it was a well written chapter but it kinda felt like a recap of what already happened but from the tinies perspective.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that's what I was trying to do,  I wanted to back up far enough to set the scene, so as not to confuse the reader as to what was taking place.  And, replay the scene from the tiny mens POV.  Only, this time, you had the advantage of 'knowing', who, the tiny men were,...

Thanks for the review Gadget! 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2014 7:34 AM Title: 'The Next Day'

Thanks for sharing!

I've been away, warding off a sinus infection. So, I was afraid you'd be on the last page of "Most Recent," by the time I caught up. Glad to see I was wrong!

Author's Response:

A steaming hot bath and chicken soup, Along with a couple of asprin, drink some strong black coffee and get some sleep.  ~ that's what I always do.  Hope ya feel better soon, Cary.

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Also, I forgot to mention your readers Jimbob and Maximus. They seem to represent Capt. Jim and Max.

You put us all in there on purpose, didn't you? Lol

Author's Response:

              Now that you mention it, I ~ 'Do' ~ see the similarities...  ;`)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2014 7:57 PM Title: 'The Next Day'

Aren't the two tinies that Marie found are Cary and Ajet? Well, that's my guess.

Also, what's with all the tinies with similar names to your readers. I'm Tom and there is a tiny called Tom. Carycomic has been reading this and there is a Cary as a tiny too. Then you have gadget reviewing this story, and I know there isn't a gadget tiny, but there is Ajet. Sounds just like gadget. Just thought I would mention that.

I wish Zena would keep a tiny. She seems hot.

Also, I think Jane has the other tinies with her, so Marie has to get Jane to give them to her first.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom!  ... or, maybe it's just 'All', one big coincidence...

things that make you say,.. "hmmmmmmmmmm".

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Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2014 1:37 PM Title: 'The Next Day'

I'm looking forward to getting more of Marie, so far she's my favorite giantess!



Author's Response:

Thank's 'Jet'!  I Hope I don't disappoint,...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2014 12:19 PM Title: 'A Shocking Revelation'

wow! You posted that chapter faster than I thought possible. And there can be only one explanation for it. The same explanation that lies behind a naked, teleporting Tim Scribe and one hysterically sobbing Cary. Counterparts from another dimension, where the laws of physics work quite differently from those in the real world!

;-D

Author's Response:

Yeah, I thought that I was going on the road, but that got cancelled at the last minute, so I just sat down and popped out another chapter. :/  .

Ah, ha!  I wondered why Tim didn't put up too much of a fight,...

I was wondering if you gave up on this story, after I slipped that little 'Vore scene' in there, without tagging it like that, but,... is it truely vore, if you've got the ability to do what PFC Scribe can do, apparantly he can't be digested, or he would have been a turd by now, Hee Hee,

... I wonder if he's read this yet?  '*.*'

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2014 12:10 PM Title: 'Escape from Tracy's Pocket'

If Spooky truly thinks she's a vegetarian, he doesn't know Jack. As for the answer to your third question? That will have to come in your next posted chapter. So, make like a crush-happy giantess...and step on it!


;-D

Author's Response:

As they say in 'bloody' Ole' England', 'Smashing',... just Smashing! (Right-toe, Ole' Chap!)  Simply,... 'Smashing!'  ;`)

- I hope Jack doesn't take this 'personally',.... ?' hee hee...


Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2014 12:33 AM Title: 'A Shocking Revelation'

Heck yeah I'm still following this. College is getting in my way though.

I found nothing strange with this chapter. Tim simply regenerated. (Or reborn). This is pretty awesome, becuase now if they die, they respawn like a video game. It makes sexy crushing possible in this story.

My only concern is when they die, do they always start over their next life at the spaceship?

Anyway, I like the descriptions of the researcher. Especially about how her hips were as wide as the cage. That's great, sexy imagery. Reminds me of Julianne in disguise.

I think all the puzzle pieces are falling into place and it seems like we're almost back to the present where you catch up with the other tinies.

I thought you would post this chapter later, but the sooner you post it, the better it is in my book.

Anyway, I think this was a great chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom, I really appreciate your attention to detail!   I do put quite a bit of 'thought' into each line of discription, and to make it appear in gradual stages, without breaking the flow,  can become exhausting,...  Keeping several plots going, at different time lines, and continuing the progression of the overall story makes for quite the challenge!

Thanks for the review.  I'll keep going as long as you're interested,...  I always look forward to you insight and imaginative suggestions!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2014 11:13 PM Title: 'Escape from Tracy's Pocket'

Another great chapter, it felt quick, but it was good.

Tom will probably be found by that dog that the researchers have.

The 3 guys trapped will get captured, including Jack. Spooky will get caught too. Dunno about what the giantesses will do with them, but I hope it leads the reporter having one.

Also, I kind of like have a giantess have a one on one time with a tiny. If there are groups of tinies, I hope they get separated.

Chapter next week, huh? Well, if these chapters about the tinies last much more, I'm gonna forget about the sisutation at the current time with Marie, Jane, Jennifer, etc. The teases are nice, but I really can't wait to hear about the other tinies.

Oh I know, while Tom is running, he accidentaly stumbled into the reporter's shoe. She took off her heels while waiting to interview someone. Then Tom ran, and slipped in her shoe. Since her high heels are so tall, he can't get out. The reporter then notices, but acts as if nothing happened. She takes him home. :)

At least now , all the tinies have felt the presence of the giantesses. Soon they will all become captured. This story just keeps getting better!

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 12:39 PM Title: 'Unknown'

Oh hell yeah, shes definitely has to do that again! Been waiting for someone to get eaten since the cake batter scene :)

 

I agree, it was necessary for poor Tim to meet his end, the story needed a little more edge, the danger didn't quite feel so dangerous anymore because you pretty much figured theyd survive whatever was happening to them. Now you've intorduced a whole nother level to the story. Good work!

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Max!  Now that I've crossed over,... This is going to get a whole lot, Hotter!

 

;`)

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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 12:26 PM Title: 'Unknown'

Whapft the frig...? She was just teasing him?! That merciless minx. Come to think of it. That would make a great title for a Saturday morning cartoon!

"Marcy the Minx. That merciless, merciless minx!
When she stuffs you in her facial cheeks, then begin the oral hijinks!"

Author's Response:

Tim E. Scribe, would be right in his 'element', would he 'Not?' 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 12:38 AM Title: 'Unknown'

So those were Tim's clothes that the researchers found in the trash can!

And wow, a vore scene! And she wants to do that again? Then there will be no more tines! Well, we shall see.

Hey wildcat, what age are these girls? They seem like 11 yrs olds, but they wear yoga pants? I would like to know their age.

So how many tiny people are there? Marie has 4, Jennifer has 1, Tim died, Tom is in a pocket, Max is in another pocket, and there were a few other guys.

Also, it's getting hard to keep track of these giantesses, especially when most of them have blonde hair. Lately, u discussed the reporter, these little girls, and now Marcy. I'm gonna get Marcy and Marie mixed up soon.

Since the helicopter has arrived, I wonder how these sexy officers deal with the remaining tinies.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom!  Look for the next chapter around wed. of next wk,  and,... Have a great weekend!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2014 11:40 AM Title: 'Crashing at the Park'

Cool start to a new set of characters, I can't wait to find out what happens to these guys!



Author's Response:

Thanks Gadget! 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2014 7:02 AM Title: 'Crashing at the Park'

Awesome job depicting that crash scene! Same thing for the ship's discovery. Although, I'm a little confused about the plot device concerning the governor's wife (Vera Shoom, was it?).

Were you hinting that she's part of some matriarchal, X-filesque conspiracy?

Author's Response:

Thanks Cary!  Ha! I knew that 'you', would find that little piece of the puzzel, having a more intricate part in this 'little' tale!  (Vera Shoom  LOl!) Good One!  ...so, you couldn't think of one for 'Whapth' 'Whapth'... ;`)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2014 11:15 PM Title: 'Crashing at the Park'

Finally they landed! Now these girls are attacking them. How old are they? They sound like teens.

Well, max just kidnapped. I wonder what happens next.

I think it's time we pay the other tinies a visit and see how they are doing. :)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom!  Can't switch back, just yet,... We have to finish out the rest of this scene first.  Although, I haven't forgotten about Billy Bob, Ann's mother, Jennifer, still has him wrapped up pretty tightly...

 

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2014 7:52 PM Title: 'Crashing at the Park'

I love the casual touch you add to your stories, like how she simply stuffs Max into her pocket, it always drives home the point just how helpless the tinies are to them. 

 

Also, if I haven't said so already, thank you very much for the character homage! 



Author's Response:

Thank You, kind Sir.   Character Homage?  Why, I don't know what you're refering to,...   ;`)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2014 1:16 PM Title: 'Out of Control'

I think these guys are in for a real surprise. I'm curious about their reactions from each guy.

They have their own personality which makes the giantess in control of them going to prefer one or the other.

We know Marie got two more from that alley. I bet one of those feisty little men will anger Marie so much that she will give him to her sister....hehe.

That should soften them up. That's what happened to Jimmy.

I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

That's right, Marie captured two of them under the dumpster in the alley way.... but which two was it?

And, that Federal Agent, with the little search dog?  She found a pair of clothing in the trash can,... but who's clothes was it?

(That accounts for three men, and we know that three more was trapped inside of the cage at the park, and taken to the hospital, but, that leaves 'one' man unaccounted for....who could he be?

 

All these questions, and more, will soon be revealed in the next fascinating installment of 'Determination'.   ;~)

-- Don't worry, Tom.  This will get so much better, after the landing. ;`)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2014 12:36 PM Title: 'Out of Control'

Oh, that Ajet has such a way with words! I would nitpickingly point out that outer space, being a vacuum, the phrase "speed of sound" would be a contradiction in terms. But, as I still sometimes refer to web-surfing as being "on the air," I will refrain from belaboring the obvious. ;-)

P.S.---Scribe and Ommic sound like really stealthy SOB's. ;-D

Author's Response:

I actually concidered that fact but, seeing as how this is set to be in the 'seventies', the speed of sound was a fairly new speed record to break in those days.  Ajet was just using that for a referance point.  He really had no idea, how fast they were actually traveling.  'Just really freakin' Fast Man!'  ;`)

* Yea, Scribe and Ommick are some tough dudes.  I just hope that they can keep it together after the ship lands....

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2014 11:32 PM Title: 'The Rescue Mission'

Ha! Punching in space! Doesn't get better than that.

Well I may take that back in the next few chapters. :)

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