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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 8:09 PM Title: Bath Time with Julianna ~ Part Two

Oh the slow torture!

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks SaftyPin,  Glad your into it!

I'll try and keep the slow pace going.  It's a constant battle to jump forward to the good stuff, but... I'm fightin' it!  ;`)

Reviewer: riczar Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

You kind of starting losing my interest after Juliana took him from her sister.  I agree, if men are so rare, then why are they treating them so badly.  Hopefully Marie can get him back in one piece.  But she'll probably have to earn his trust all over again.



Author's Response:

Thanks Riczar,  I think Marie will get him back, although... he might be a little bit worn out!  ;`)

 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2014 4:42 PM Title: Bath Time with Julianna ~ Part Two

I loved the chapter very sexy! I kinda think its odd how badly some of these females treat their little men considering how rare even normal sized men are! What if they die, and of starvation even?

How much food can one of these tiny men really need? I dont know, it just seems like it would be such a waste for something so rare to die just because...And so far the majority of the females have been terrible to their little men!

Im not just saying this cuz I like gentle, its because of how rare men are in that world that it kinda doesnt make sense how badly some of the girls treat them. Other than that odd point this story had been a blast to read.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Gadget!  Actually, I thought that, they weren't Really, all that 'Mean'.... just, very playful and humiliateing, towards the weaker sex.  (Except for the giantess in chapter 1 that just simply stomped on them) they're really just a bunch of 'Big Teasers'...

Although, Sam was a very lucky little man...to get away from Elsa and Giselle, because they definitely would have eaten him alive!  ;`)

Thanks for the support, and I'm glad that your into it!   Always look forward to your opinion, always need some good feedback from other authors such as yourself.

Thanks again!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 25 2014 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

where did wildcatman go? Its been a while. You must be busy att he moment so take your time.

I hope you come back soon, becuase you left me a very encouraging reply to my review. Probably the sexiest reply I recveived from a review ever.

Anyway, I cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2014 9:24 PM Title: 'Escape/ Entrapment'

These little dudes just can't catch a break can they? Good for us though XP.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 18 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oops. I forgot this story is from another story from a memory. Nevermind my suggestions, but if the sexy stuff can be changed, then I would be happy to read about it. :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2014 3:43 PM Title: 'Escape/ Entrapment'

A little recap here.

Jimmy still stuck in Julianne's panties.

Sam stuck inside Marie's purse.

Bill stolen by a little girl.

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Ok, so I hope Julianne ties Jimmy to her panties literally, like threading his limbs to the fabric of her panties. Becuase thats my definition of a panty trap. What you did was my second favorite idea which I call sex with a giantess. Many people write about it, but few write it using panties to trap the tiny to her. Now I hope she wakes with a long day work, and ties him to her underwear. Now that will be hot. I want Julianne to be a panties expert.(Just adding sexy ideas to your wildcat head. :)

Marie lost Jimmy, but got Sam. I am glad you decided to go this way, becuase over time, i didnt like Elsa and her family. Im not a fan of chubby fingers as my image of a giantess. Juliane is my favorite giantess, and Marie is my second, so im glad those two now have tiny men and not Elsa.
I think Marie is the caring type and she would be a great bra expert.

Finally, we have Bill with this little girl. However, im not focused on the little girl. im focused on her mother. The little girl might play dolls with him or somthing, but i dont know her age, so i assume she is a preteen or younger. This mother though seems interesting. Im a fan of MILF's and no, im not thinking of a tiny's own mother. Im tired of reading about stories where the mother is having fun with her son. It makes me feel weird, so im glad you didnt do that. I like what you are doing and writing about these random mothers that I can use my imagination to be as sexy as they can be. I hope this mother is a sexy giantess who is also caring and will treat Bill like a husband. I hope she will kiss him often, and maybe one day shove Bill in her panties hoping for an unforgettable experience.

Well, thats my suggestion which I hope you do write about. Its your story, so no pressure, but I hope my ideas do give you some more ideas that I like. :)

Author's Response:

Now that's what I call a 'Review'! 

 Bill was captured by the young girl for only, just a few minutes,..( I just like using that type of situation to show how vulnerable you would be at that size.)  And, Her mother took him away from her and revived him. She won't be allowed to play with him anymore... I guess, it's a type of humiliation factor, but it general shows how dangerous it would be...

 Bill wasn't stolen away from Valerie, she still has him.  He couldn't get away from her that easy! ;`)

Julianna has one of those sewing kits.  She likes to add costume jewelry to her dresses and jeans.  She might find some use for it, with a pair of silk panties that she really likes to wear... she wears them all the time.  Last time time she wore them for three days before taking them off! 

Jim might have to get used to the idea of being cramped up inside her pockets, and other tight places...

We'll see what happens next chapter!  Thanks Tom!

Oh Yeah, I really hate those (Mother and Son) storys too!  Turns my stomach!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 9:58 PM Title: 'Pantie Trap'

Perfect! I hope Julianee walks around with Jim inside her panties in chapter 9.

I cant wait!

Author's Response:

Thanks Tom, but somehow I knew that you'd like it!  Let's see,... next chapter we'll return to check out Sam.  Then either go back to Bill and Valerie, oor maybe Marie might get back into the action first?  I don't know yet,... I've got about half of chap. 8 and it's spinning out pretty quick, but I still have only a rough draft to go by,... and, who knows what will happen after that!   ;`)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 12:01 PM Title: 'Pantie Trap'

Yep! Marie is _definitely_ not getting him back...ever.

Author's Response:

Nebber - Nebber - Nebber..... Julia like little Jimmy.  ;`)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 11:56 AM Title: 'Hungry Girls / A Wild Ride'

I wonder if Big Brenda would accept Marie's declaration of "I found mine fair and square," if Marie declined to give her little man up?

Something tells me...uh-uh!

Author's Response:

Big Brenda hungry.... want fresh meat...  Now!  ;`)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2014 2:30 AM Title: 'Hungry Girls / A Wild Ride'

Best part of this chapter was the end notes. Changing the rating to 'X' is a plus in my book, and I think I already know why. Hehe.

Author's Response:

Yeah it was kinda slow, but that's what builds the suspence, I think it's called a plot... or something like that  ;`)

Thanks Tom!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2014 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope you are right Carycomic. I hope Julianne keeps Jim for a long time. :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2014 11:03 AM Title: 'Expectation'

"But, I don't think that she'll mind. Just bring him back when you're through with him."

Yeah, right. Like either of those things are really going to happen. Jim has a better chance of being beamed up by a rescue ship, from Earth, prior to Julianne getting back to her place with him!*

*Which is about the same chance I have of winning the MEGABUCKS FOR LIFE LOTTERY on the very first try. ;-)

Author's Response:

Don't forget about Marie....  She's gunna be pissed!  ;`)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2014 10:49 AM Title: Possession

Happy Birthday, Giselle...and rest in piece (of cake), Sam. :-(

Author's Response:

Yea, Sam's in for some 'sticky' fun!  ;`)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2014 10:46 AM Title: Ch. 3 ~ 'Realization'

If I were Capt. Strum, and had a giant nympho mihf like Jane hovering over me? I would have opted to stay in the coffee shop during the bug spraying!

Author's Response:

Nooo, Not.... "R.A.I.D!"   '*-*'

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2014 10:12 PM Title: 'Expectation'

I change my mind. Elsa is not my favorite character that I said from chapter 1. Now its Julianne.

I love her attitude and hiw she bound Jimmy up like that. And how did you know that I like pantie traps?!! I didnt mention it here. I guess you saw a review I made on another story.

Also, a tiny being bound is super hot to me. At first I thought why is pantie trap titled for chapter 7, but not chapter 6. Then i realized that chapter 6 will be about Samuel and chapter 7 will return to Jimmy. Perfect!

As for the jumping back and forth part, I didnt mind that, but I did mind once I had to learn a few more names to the story. Instead of being confused as to which tiny and giantess you were talking about, I got confused when you mentioned a new character and then jumped around. But no need to worry about that since now I know all of them.

Samuel's turn is next. Cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Yup, I read one of your reviews on another story, and I remembered it.  (I like that kinda thing too!)  ;`)

Yeah, there won't be anymore 'additional' charactors in this tale.  Elsa and Giselle has Sam.  Valerie has Bill.  Jane, HAD Jim, but now,  her older daughter Julianne has him, and I don't think that he's EVER going to get away from HER...

Marie's Not going to give up though, she's going to want her littleman Back!

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2014 5:49 PM Title: Possession

This chapter felt slow, but I hope it gets going in the next chapter.

I cant wait!

Author's Response:

The next one might be a bit slow as well.  Got to work on some charactor development, and set the scene, ya know.  But, the way things are going, this is getting pretty hot for these tiny survivors.  Thanks for reading Tom!

You're going to really like, chapter seven (7)... it's titled:  'Pantie Trap'.    ;`)

Reviewer: tylby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2014 2:54 AM Title: Ch. 3 ~ 'Realization'

Great start! Continue please, you write good stories.



Author's Response:

Thanks Tylby!  I'll keep going, if you keep reviewing! 

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2014 11:36 PM Title: Ch. 3 ~ 'Realization'

90 percent female, wouldn't mind that. Maybe in the next life.

Nice chapter can wait for the next.

Author's Response:

Ah, the next life... be careful what you wish for.  If it actually happened to you, would you be lucky enough to end up with a gentle one?  Hopefully...  ;`)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2014 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh. im sorry. I just read your reply to my review. If you cant change it, that is fine.

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