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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2015 6:21 PM Title: 'The Hospital'

Love Zena Maxwell and I am curious what her camera girl does. You do such a good job of painting a picture. Love this story. It would not be bad if she or someone else steps on him. I would assume that she would find someone else. I also am interested in Dr. Elizabeth Harris. She will make a great Giantess. I would assume that she would expect to be obeyed and respected by the little men. You know with the YesMa'am and all of that. It will be great when she does blood test and stool samples.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2014 1:10 PM Title: 'The Hospital'

I agree with Dr. Harris about the sound of Rachel's voice. In my permanent opinion, there is no sound more agonizing--to the human male nervous system--than the giggling of young adult females. Especially the adolescent ones!

Author's Response:

Well, they're 'college-age', girls,... but still, very young looking... and their laughter sounds very 'adolescent-ish'!  I have to agree, that it's kinda like fingernails on a chalk-board, when they suddenly burst out,...

...and can you imagine, (at six inches tall) if you were standing on a stainless steel platform, and... their amplified voice was twelve times more powerful in sheer volume ? ? ?   .:0'

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2014 2:51 AM Title: 'The Hospital'

Love the change in scenery.

These 3 men get a free tour of the city and I like the detail you gave it. The part where there was a mom and a child, I wished that the mom could've taken one. She sounded interesting.

The men waiting for the doctor reminds me when a hot nurse leads you to a room and she leaves and u wait for your hot doctor to show up next.

I mean everyone sounds fit and attractive by the descriptions you gave them.

I wonder what the doctor will find after the experiments. I hope it's something bizarre, like a tiny man gets more stamina when he gets inserted in a vagina or somthing.

Either way, I can't to find out in the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Well Tom, I don't want to release any 'spoilers', and I can't say what will happen next, but,... Wow!  I even 'surprised' Myself with this next One!  :`)

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Dr. Harris suddenly gets very horny!   When she actually touchs one of the tiny men, it triggers something that she's had buried deep inside her for a long, long time! 

Reviewer: abc3643 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2014 7:08 PM Title: 'The Hospital'

I like your work very much, but, please, spell check!!



Author's Response:

Tanks Man!  I well be vury watchfull of these misspellin's!  ;`)

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