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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 11:56 AM Title: 'Hungry Girls / A Wild Ride'

I wonder if Big Brenda would accept Marie's declaration of "I found mine fair and square," if Marie declined to give her little man up?

Something tells me...uh-uh!

Author's Response:

Big Brenda hungry.... want fresh meat...  Now!  ;`)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2014 2:30 AM Title: 'Hungry Girls / A Wild Ride'

Best part of this chapter was the end notes. Changing the rating to 'X' is a plus in my book, and I think I already know why. Hehe.

Author's Response:

Yeah it was kinda slow, but that's what builds the suspence, I think it's called a plot... or something like that  ;`)

Thanks Tom!

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