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Reviewer: Chloe13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 6:34 PM Title: Prologue

Well where to begin what I have read thus far I have enjoyed reading your story. You are doing a great job at making detailed sentences  so I have enjoyed that especially your most recent chapter.

 

Next this is only a suggestion but I suggest making your chapters a little longer just because it leaves your reader more satisfied after reading a chapter of nice length. When they are short you don't get the hook that you need to pull your readers in.

 

Overall I  think it is a good story soooo keep up the good work.

 

-Chloe

Reviewer: TheSilentOne Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2014 5:47 PM Title: Prologue

I assume you mean "Steve the Speck"

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