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Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2014 9:15 AM Title: Report 6: Cambralart Financials, Interview 3: Daniel Jackson and Karine Templeton

Quoting Dr House, "men are pigs" - no matter how much I try I can't stop thinking that there's someone, somewhere, who got in trouble when it was discovered that he didn't consiider his punishment, well, punishment (the day I finally put the details down I'll probably request a custom video).

 

The only thing I don't understand is, if it worked so well for Ms Beakman, why don't they use the PRMD at Techilogic as well... I bet TC would be much more productive, and I'm 100% sure he would receive fewer complaints.

 

Oh, by the way: the actual content fell into your hands somehow, I hope that doesn't imply a nyrhing about how the story ends ;)



Author's Response:

They actually do use the PMRD in certain departments of Techilogic, and the problem is that the very people complaining to Howard are the ones who would probably have the ability to use it as a punishment if desired.  I won't spoil the ending, though if you read far enough down in the reviews, you would probably figure it out... Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2014 3:19 PM Title: Report 6: Cambralart Financials, Interview 3: Daniel Jackson and Karine Templeton

@Jacksmith: Yeah, he'd have to have his face altered to get in with Tania. Now let's see where he goes next. My guess is that in the next memo he's going to be fired, and then he'll be fighting this on his own, and then...



Author's Response:

Well, you weren't that far off!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2014 7:55 PM Title: Report 6: Cambralart Financials, Interview 3: Daniel Jackson and Karine Templeton

I fully suspected something like that was going behind the scenes.

 

Now it's up to Howard to right these wrongs somehow.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 28 2014 2:06 PM Title: Report 6: Cambralart Financials, Interview 3: Daniel Jackson and Karine Templeton

Ordinarily, one would want a detailed description, but in this case, glossing over the events conveyed great unease with it. This chapter would not have worked at all if Karine just casually described a "seminar" in detail.

You've also left some good opportunities to follow up. Obviously, a second interview with Daniel and/or Karine is possible. There's also the possibility of Howard going in disguise as an employee, and recording some truly damning evidence. How easy would a wire be to spot on a three inch wearer?

Another question is, how much of this is going on with the people we've seen previously? We already know that they were not saying things they weren't supposed to reveal.



Author's Response:

Thanks; I figured subtlety made more sense than going in-depth with description here. That's not a bad idea about going undercover. It's not something that'll be happening in this one, but it definitely makes sense for him to try with a boss who doesn't recognize him already.  And that's really up to interpretation what's going on behind the scenes, though I would guess not many people are being quite as sinister as Tania.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2014 1:46 PM Title: Report 6: Cambralart Financials, Interview 3: Daniel Jackson and Karine Templeton

Way to go, TC! Link up with the drummer and the flute player, and hold that flag high.

Author's Response:

Oh he definitely is.

Reviewer: DarcKage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2014 11:20 AM Title: Report 6: Cambralart Financials, Interview 3: Daniel Jackson and Karine Templeton

Howard's heading into dangerous territory now.

Either he'll succeed and take down the system, or get caught and shrunk down himself. Whichever it is, I'm sure you'll deliver. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  I'll do my best!

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