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Reviewer: lilguyunderfoot Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2014 6:19 AM Title: Report 3: South Hanenrow University, Interview 1: Professor Ellen Taggert

cool stuff. ilike the dialogue

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2014 8:21 AM Title: Report 3: South Hanenrow University, Interview 1: Professor Ellen Taggert

Great, great, great! Even if, gIven how good you are at keeping a story going with the same characters for hundreds of pages, I think changing characters every two chapters makes it too easy ;)

 

For some reason I totally love when the punishment is (at least formally) "reasonable", "for their own sake" - and even more the few cases where the tinies actually have some way out, at least in theory.

 

I'd write more, but I think I'll go on reading instead...

 

(compulsory picture reference: "teacher's pet", from the cobburt collection)

 

PS

Glad to hear that it's still unknown how long Scott will have to stay shrunken!

But until you write otherwise, I'll still assume that he really wasn't listening and doesn't know how long he's going to stay like that...

 



Author's Response: Glad you're liking it so far!

Reviewer: blackairow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2014 4:40 AM Title: Report 3: South Hanenrow University, Interview 1: Professor Ellen Taggert

This story definitely has a different feel than most stories I'm use to reading. By that I mean you as the reader are not in any one characters head. Even without that though I feel like I know  Howards viewpoint and thoughts on TSA and how it is being implemented. His small comments / responces to the actions or statements of those he interviews say alot. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! Glad you're enjoying it. My goal was definitely to get that distanced feeling from any one character's perspective.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2014 5:04 PM Title: Report 3: South Hanenrow University, Interview 1: Professor Ellen Taggert

Ellen seems like a reasonable lady, good stuff.



Author's Response:

You may not still think that about Ellen after the next chapter...

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