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Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 01 2014 4:13 AM Title: Report 2: The Edwards Family, Interview 1: Kitty Edwards

You're doing well with the style so far. This could get very interesting. You're going to have lots of opportunities to explore the moral and social issues of this technology.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I'm looking forward to showing the other ways I'm exploring the challenges and consequences of the tech.

Reviewer: socksarecool Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2014 9:53 AM Title: Report 2: The Edwards Family, Interview 1: Kitty Edwards

I can't wait to see how this ties in with "Her Sick Game" and all of your other stories. I really like where this is heading and I guess that means Carly is 54 years old (35+19).

This probably wouldn't ever happen, but since Scott's mom has "connections", and the time-out series features women around Judy's age(Except his sister and his GF), does this mean that Carly could ever pop up in the Time-out series? Perhaps Amanda from The Love Games could also test to see if Scott is "faithful" to his gf(Even though she probably hates him atm). ;)

I don't want to sound like I am trying to kill off Scott in the Time-Out series(He's probably innocent and his mom could have had someone put something in his drink(s)) but that would it would be like an avengers/justice league story/movie(Except the fact that they wouldn't be heros).



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Carly actually won't be appearing in person in this story, but there will be some more references to her later on. Amanda's story took place prior to Blackmail, so she would be pretty old by this point, if she's even still alive; I know this wasn't explained in Love Games, but she's one who discovered the homemade chemical method for shrinking and just kept it to herself. Your comment about avengers/justice league made me chuckle.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2014 6:49 PM Title: Report 2: The Edwards Family, Interview 1: Kitty Edwards

I lke the style of the story, like an inside edition for fans of our fetish. 



Author's Response:

That definitely crossed my mind as well. Thanks for reading!

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