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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2018 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 – An Angry Man

@280077s

Than you should try this story.
http://www.giantessworld.net/reviews.php?type=ST&item=4256

 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2018 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 – An Angry Man

Everyday I check GTSworld for some great new story. This is amazing , it isn't new but I am so happy to see you back! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words. I have been working on it quite a lot lately after a long break. Life happens and we can't put the time into things as much as we would like. There're a big chapter coming in the next few days that have some really intersting stuff. The antidote works, but all I can say is it's a bit up and down for our hero. Montly down.

Reviewer: Js23 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2018 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 – An Angry Man

please keep going!!! this is some of the best yet



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments. More is on the way. 

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2015 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 – An Angry Man

YESSSS!!!! I'm glad it's back ... I need more chapters!!! This is one of the greatest stories ever written!! Please continue and add some more booty play please?? Thanks

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2015 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 1 – An Angry Man

Thank you soooo much for updating!! I've been waiting a long time!! I love where the story is going now.. The latest chapter is AWESOME!!! Could you add butt action to the story? lol as a regular? With the way you write it will be legendary!! Feet and ass are the best parts of a giantess story!!

Reviewer: riczar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2015 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 – An Angry Man

Glad to see this story continued!  I'm more a fan of the imperfect cure, especially in the giantess/shrinking genre.  What can I say, I hate to see the fun end!  I mean that he gets his size back and for the most part can live a normal life, except occasionally he'd relapse and shrink again.  Since sex initiated the original shrinking, maybe have sex cause temporary size loss?  Multiple times brings him back to his tiny size and it takes time to regrow.  I just think Carlos and Deborah are a cute couple, made even better by the size difference.

I look forward to the next part!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2015 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 – An Angry Man

Thanks for updating, was worried that you left for good. 

I hope Carlos gets his size back, this seems like one of those stories where the shrunken person deserves their size back and I would be surprised if you didn't give it back to Carlos.

Reviewer: noneaccount Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 22 2014 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 – An Angry Man

A classic.  Glad to see it back! 

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 – An Angry Man

Holy shit this is in like the top 3 best stories on this site!! Well in my book anyways lol!! I love this story soo much!! So much detail and the length is sooo awesome!! Please keep this going and add more butt action!! Other than that this story is a fucking 15 out of 10!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 – An Angry Man

Carlos is scared and a two inches, she'd really tower over him now. Guess its double or nothing for him now. 

Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 – An Angry Man

Wow, I am surprised by this twist in the plot! 

Deborah set him up all this time, man that was something I never saw coming although she didn't expect him to shrink but then...what was Paige having her do? 

 Can't wait to see what you've planned for the rest of the story!

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2014 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 – An Angry Man

This story has peaked my interest! This could very well become a movie at how well written it is. It has so much detail and it's just a juicy story to get lost in!! Is it possible to add some butt action to the story every now and then? Cause booty is always awesome!!! But I'm waiting "patiently" for the next chapter!!! I'm sooo Effin excited about this story!! Remember to add butt if you can. Thanks. Keep up the awesome work and keep the chapters nice and long :)

Reviewer: aknouh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 – An Angry Man

AWESOME JOB BUDDY =P

Reviewer: vgiv Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2014 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 1 – An Angry Man

While I do like the plot, I had a hard time deciphering what anybody looked like, what they're rank was, and the chapter was very long, so at the end I was sorta forcing myself to read. I do however like if not love the interaction and conversation. You are able to mix physical interaction with vocal action very easily, better than what I could do early in my time on the site.

You show promise, welcome to the site! I do hope this story, which is already interesting, will be continued.

P.S, this seems a bit to good for a first time writer, is this you're first time writing? It does not seem so.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback. I started this story about 2 years ago. It is my first time writing, so your points are welcome. I have a little over 125,000 words written in 2 parts. I will break up the chapters to a bit smaller chunks.

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