You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: The Lurkmeister Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2014 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice! Very well paced with great descriptions, very enjoyable. The ending was magnificent. Thank you for this.

Reviewer: Amateur Wordsmith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 22 2014 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Its good to see a nice short story done by a seasoned author nowadays. most experienced authors are too busy writing multi-chapter wordfests to put out something like this so I congratulate you on writing this.

The story itself is well done. Punishing the adoptive sister is not something I have ever seen on this site. I also liked the ending, it reminds me of my own fantasies.

 

 

You must login (register) to review.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.