Date: December 31 2016 2:16 PM Title: Special Ingredient
A bit odd, and quite unexpected. A bit sad I didn't see this story sooner. It's a decent read.
Date: May 16 2014 7:03 PM Title: Special Ingredient
I agree. That was awesome.
Date: May 16 2014 6:52 PM Title: Special Ingredient
This is some very nice work you've done. It might sound like a weird thing to fixate on, but I was very impressed with your ability to convey description through movement, particularly during the meatier part of the mouthplay. Given the complexity of a human interaction that has absolutely no basis in reality and therefore no easily accessed vocabulary to communicate how truly intimate it is, it can be hard to pull off, but you did it quite well. Overall, I think it's a neat experimentation with the genre to not give them names or even really identities: it's a relationship story, and it feels very tight and focused. Good luck to you in continuing.
[Report This]Date: May 16 2014 6:30 PM Title: Special Ingredient
Haha. He took the words right out of my mouth.
Food play, eh? Now that's not something I see often. I like it.
I cringed when I read this: Oh, he was such a perfect little man, she thinks.
All I could think of was... Oh God. She eats him.
Thank goodness it was a typo, because gentle(and dominating) giantesses are the only ones I'm comfortable with.
By the way, I checked my email, and I haven't received any private messages. It might not have gone through.
Lastly... Two updates in a day, and both chapters containing my favorite kinds of intimacy. Yeah, this just got favorited.
Author's Response: I'm glad you've favorited this! I'm honored. I will never, ever, never, ever involve vore in a story. I'll never read it either. I just can't- it's not appealing to me. And I don't like the slave dynamic- I would like to treat them as gentle and I write the same, but expressing power such as with the soup is definitely a must. Uh, oh well I suppose. I simply responded by telling you that my intent had been for you to connect yourself with the characters, although the giantess is inspired by myself. :) And I also thanked you for such a nice response- I like the real feedback you'd given me.