Reviews For A Fly On the Wall
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Reviewer: Bug Lover Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2016 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 9: what Now?

what the hell is up with the giant action?

Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2014 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 9: what Now?

The fat fly and the snails conversation made me laugh. I'm not into animal intraction but those were witty moments. especially the fly not understanding why he was rejected.  

You had me on edge waiting for him to fly into someones food the whole chapter, but at least I have something to look forward to in the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comliment. Its always nice to know that things are coming acros the way you want them to. And don't worry, you will not have to wait long.

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