[Report This]Date: June 01 2014 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 8: The slow digesting process
Totally in love with the plot :') I still hope youll could do an unfortunate ending, I know you said you didnt want to. Maybe you can do two endings, one "happy ending" and one not? Maybe one where he ends as bird poop haha :x I also had another idea for the fly. Maybe there could be a chapter with a police horse patrole, and him ending near one of the horses rear ends when it's lift its tail, could also be en ending idea, where one of the two horses says there is a pesky fly around his rear really bothering him and lifting its tail doesnt swish it away, and he asks his horse friend to deal with it, which does so in using his mouth to snap/lick for it and swallowing the fly. The irony would be, that the fly would end as horse manure.
Author's Response:
I love the horse idea! And that would fit so perfectly into this to. I will try very hard to include that.
And i'm going to be honest, don't love the unfortunate ending thing. I want this story to have a happy tone to it. That bieng said, i might be open to writting an alternate ending. I mean, why not?