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Reviewer: Voreman123 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2015 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Can't believe this never got carried on, could have been great! :(

Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2014 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good start. But can you consider switching to first or third person narrative?

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2014 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

Neat, I'll be curious to see where it goes.

Reviewer: Voreman123 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2014 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

More more more! :333 can't wait

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