Date: October 22 2014 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
I really enjoyed this chapter. Mary & Jennifer have developed a neat dynamic (friends but Jennifer has no problem stuffing her down her shirt), and I'm enjoying Mary's learning experience about what a crappy friend she was.
One question, Mary seems convinced that she's going to be returned to full size. Maybe I lost track of this plot, but have they been searching for the potion?
Author's Response:
Why, thank you. I do try to develop my plots and characters to a likable point.
Oh, you just ain't seen nothin' yet regarding Mary learning things about herself. I have a plan (again) regarding his whole endeavor.
I knew there was something I forgot to explain.
Okay, here it is: Jennifer's birthday took place on a Saturday. That means chapters 4, 5,and 6 are on Sunday. Due to the fact that (as I explained) it's the post office that distributes the re-growth serum, the fact that the post office is closed on Sundays means that she's stuck waiting until Monday at the earliest to requisition a new one, the assumption being that they simply forgot to add it in.
So, they've pretty much gven up on searching for it, and are waiting until Monday rolls around in-universe. That solve your problem?