[Report This]Date: June 05 2014 6:54 AM Title: Chapter Three - A dark passenger within
*insert picture of M. Night Shyamalan here*
WHAT A TWIST!!
Such an unexpected turn of events to give the main character such a detailed and sophisticated background. I felt that the way you fleshed out the main character was a brilliant idea. His past experiences combined with his admiration for this killer of a women will undoubtedly make for an intriguing read.
Additional praise is rewarded for adding a 'gentle' side to the giantess. Most people either make a giantess 100% cruel or 100% gentle, however by tossing this ridgid dichotomy out the window you have succeeded where scores of authors have failed. You have managed to create a cruel/gentle mix.
Looking foward to this one Ifcfan. I may have to step up my own game now because of this chapter.
Author's Response:
Well, I do hope that the rest of my giantess writing 'career' doesn't turn out like Shaymalan's post-Sixth Sense directing one. :D
Going for a detailed and sophisticated background for my main characters has always been my primary goal in this story. I want this to be kind of a 'psychological' story dealing with the mindstates of my characters as much as their actions. I plan to explore those sides much deeper in future chapters.
And I'm glad you've picked up on the gentle side of her, it has got everything to do with how she views the tinies, how she perceives her own status and how her past has shaped her personality, which you'll see when I get to it.
I'm glad that you think I've done a good job with this. Honestly, I don't think I've ever experienced such a rush of reviews for a single chapter. I must be on the right track I guess!
[Report This]Date: June 01 2014 5:49 AM Title: Chapter Three - A dark passenger within
Oh this is very interesting. She's no killer? I am very interested now since she is trying to prove him wrong.
Author's Response:
She definitely views the killing parts differently, but even she is under no illusions about whether she is one or not. I'll be exploring the different view points in greater detail in the coming chapters!
Date: May 31 2014 3:00 AM Title: Chapter Three - A dark passenger within
Nice twist in this chapter. Maybe we'll see these two become a team.
Author's Response:
Thanks! It'll be an interesting 'team' for sure. :)
Date: May 31 2014 2:57 AM Title: Chapter Three - A dark passenger within
Interesting development with Matthew. I'm looking foward to the redhead's [violent] demonstration.
Author's Response:
I have something special planned, but I have to add a little flavor to it first. Hopefully I won't delay it more than a week.