Reviews For Theophobia
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Orpheus Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2015 8:08 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen- Maia Reborn (Part Five)

Really glad to see this on the front page again after so long.

The flashback is finally over too, some more action with Matthew sounds great. Though looks like he's in a bit of trouble. Hopefully he gets back on her good side in one piece.

 



Author's Response:

Yup, the flashback's finally over. Time to develop their relationship more, but of course there's gonna be bumps along the way. :)

Reviewer: tingle01 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2015 10:32 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen - Maia Reborn (Part Three)

One of my current favorite stories out here on GtsWorld.
I did like how you have been depicting Maia's feelings in the last few chapters. But now I'm also looking forward to seeing how things will unfold in the present, I can't wait for the next chapter :)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! It's been getting very quiet here in GTSW lately for me. I'm really glad that you like the story, it should get back to the present in two chapters. :)

Reviewer: Sugary-Micro Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter Twelve - Maia (Part Four)

;A; more omgomgomgomg the story is so good, excluding anything sexual its a fucking brain fuck and omg Im actually interested as you as an author, I hope you go on to make all sorts of books and shit with your interesting self gah



Author's Response:

Hah! Thanks for the warm review! If you ever want to ask me anything, just send me a note over at DeviantArt. The link is in my profile or at the beginning of this story here.

Reviewer: Cruel_gts Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2014 12:56 PM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris

Best story I've seen on this entire site. This author manages to describe the giantess's torture methods in amazing detail, which is something most other authors fail to do. I love how she drags it out and displays her total dominance. With all of this, author still manages to keep an awesome plot. This would make a really good movie.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm really glad that you think so highly of this story, I'm honored. :)

I do wonder how the average person would react to a movie with brutal scenes such as in this one though. :D

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2014 7:01 PM Title: Chapter Ten - Maia (Part Two)

I used to pity Sylisia. Not anymore. She was lying her whole life, wasn't she?

I really love this plot development, it uncovers that those Maia abuse may not be completely innocent while showing the ridiculousness of racism.

Author's Response:

I will be exploring her past for quite a few more chapters. Everything will become clear by the end. :)

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2014 2:15 PM Title: Chapter Nine - Maia (Part One)

Sylisia must be an undercover racist bitch who played Maia for a fool and was working for her government the entire time (or something like that). I can't see any other reason for Maia to treat her "friend" so cruelly. If my hunch is correct, then any sympathy I had for Sylisia earlier in this story is gone completely.

Author's Response:

Hmmm... something like that. But her motives are far more basic. You'll see in the next two or three chapters. ;)

Reviewer: Ravean Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2014 10:41 AM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris

This is an outstanding awesome story so far and I am glad you are kind of greedy when it comess to the gory scenes... it makes it much more interesting than going from one cruah to the next vore and so on. I would have loved some more full weight foot crush action without grinding but as I said... it´s perfect the way it is. I adore your patience because it gives you the ability to get deeper into the details of everything. Also... the story is very interesting and unique, only thing that i can´t buy so far is that change in Maia from Icequeen-Primal Beast-Evil Temptres into a purring kitten with Mathew... but I´m sure you´ll have your ideas already set. Oh, and... don´t have her kill him please... better find a way how they can be good for each other. Can´t wait for the next parts...



Author's Response:

Thank you for your generous review!

I get what you mean by going from crush to vore and so on. It's like reading a template, it get boring very fast and stories like that remain largely unmemorable.

The story still has a lot to go through. The next two or three chapters are going to be a little boring too, but as you said, I'm not rushing it and I'm keeping myself patient. But afterwards, I think you'll like it since it'll include some of what you're looking for.

And the change in Maia's attitude towards Matthew is intentional and not a simple as it seems, don't worry. Everything will become clearer as the story progresses. But how it's going to end for Matthew though, that's something you'll just have to read to find out. :)

 

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2014 8:08 AM Title: Chapter Nine - Maia (Part One)

I'm not sure what to make of this plot development...

Author's Response:

Is that a good or a bad thing? :p

There are going to be a lot more parts though, seven or eight by my estimation.

Reviewer: Megagiant5280 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2014 8:48 PM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris

Maia can make people grow and shrink....interesting, very interesting.



Author's Response:

And more. ;)

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter Eight - Eternal Falling

Oh god I have so many theories, ranging from "Maia is a social experiment" to "Maia was sexually abused and ostracized from her community" to "Maia was forced to mother all of humankind as she knows it". Mind you, I also have theories where all three of these theories interlock in some way. I can't take the suspense!

Author's Response:

And as the good little author that I am, I'm not gonna tell you anything obviously. :D

But your guesses are quite good actually, at least in the direction I wanted the reader to aim for. 

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2014 6:48 PM Title: Chapter Eight - Eternal Falling

Please tell me we're going to learn why Maia beats the living shit out of her supposed "friend".

Author's Response:

You're going to learn about her soon enough, don't worry. ;)

Reviewer: combine44 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 21 2014 1:52 PM Title: Chapter Seven - Dihydrogen Monoxide

Scared to say now lol, I think she sees him as something completely different than the rest of her victims. Could be that she cares about him or that she's setting him up like the guy in Interlude #2. Next few chapters will be very intense O.O



Author's Response:

Thanks for the input! Needless to say, I can't share what's truly happening for obvious reason, but let's just say that I'm glad that you are thinking exactly along the lines of what I want the reader to think.

So, thanks again! :)

Reviewer: TinyLeo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter Seven - Dihydrogen Monoxide

Great!! thanks for the vore part, it was really good...hope to read next chapter soon!!

 

BTW, she isn't in love with the guy...she is just playing isn't she?? 



Author's Response:

Well, the point is for it not to be clear. But I do love to hear what you think about it. :)

Reviewer: combine44 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2014 5:44 PM Title: Chapter Seven - Dihydrogen Monoxide

I really hope Maia's reaction at the end of this chapter means what I think it means. That cliffhanger though, another great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

And what do you think it means? *smiles mischievously*

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2014 11:19 AM Title: Chapter Six - Sweat

It's really terrifying what trauma can do to a person...

Author's Response:

I do hope I'm keeping it believable enough...

Reviewer: TinyLeo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2014 6:07 AM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris

I appreciatte that a lot!! Thanks!! :D :D



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: TinyLeo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter Six - Sweat

Great :) The wait worths it!! Although I hope to see some vore soon please :(



Author's Response:

Oh yeah, Vore. I've planned a lot more smutty stuff for this story, but the plot is getting in the way hehe...

There is going to be a scene in the future similar to a 'Hannibal'-style feast, but with little people instead. But I'm not sure when I'll get to write that. So, just for you, I'll include a little bit of Vore in the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: combine44 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2014 2:39 PM Title: Intro - Deus ex Tenebris

Very well written story so far, I'm loving her relationship with Matthew. Its what i like to call the unique gentle context. Where she has shown no compassion or mercy to anyone, but Matthew so far. One thing I would say that makes this story so good so far is that you haven't shown much of Maia's perspective. Keeping her motives and opinions of Matthew secret has done alot for making her a unique and memorable character. Also having him be a psychiatrist was a perfect choice. Keep up the good work I think this could be one of the best stories on this site, or at least one of my favorites.:)

 

Ps. I will be crushed if she ends up killing Matthew :(



Author's Response:

Oh hey! Thanks a lot! Sorry, but I haven't seen that you've reviewed the story. Quite busy these days.

Their relationship is why I've started this story to be honest. I wanted to train myself writing a story where it was important to show what the main character was thinking, why he was thinking that way and mix it with traits and situations that are a little bit out of the ordinary. Being a 'mind-reader' was the obvious choice for Matthew IMO and I'm glad you like it. :)

I've always intended to keep Maia's motives hidden and the general setting a little bit mysterious in the beginning, and instead focus on Matthew. But the story will be progressing a little bit into Maia's territory now and her history. I've written half of the following chapter and should be ready in the coming days/week.

Thanks again and I'm terribly sorry for the late reply!

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08 2014 6:36 AM Title: Chapter Five - Session (Part One)

You've got me hooked, you clever, clever man.

Author's Response:

It's the first time someone called me clever, lol! Thanks! I'm glad that you like the story. :)

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2014 1:07 PM Title: Chapter Four - Stairway to...

Loved the chapter! It was a super sexy experiment—these are the kinds of chapters I like the most because they are more interesting than the typical: giant girl vs city affair. I also really liked the thoughts that Matthew was having in regards to how easily she ended lives just for a quick burst of pleasure.

 

Good stuff, consider me hooked!



Author's Response:

I remember you being much more into gentle stuff back when I started writing here man! I guess you couldn't resist the dark side! Violent GTS FTW :p

 

You must login (register) to review.