[Report This]Date: April 29 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Congratulations on the start of a great story, I'm really liking your writing. If you are open to suggestions, I think you could explore some more maternal themes.
Just my $.02. Great job so far!
Date: April 24 2014 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great start! Luke should be alble to survive on only breast milk, which plays into the infant role and increases their control over him. I also like the bondage idea where Luke is attached to or immobilized by different giantess body parts. After all, the world is a dangerous place and they are only doing it for his own protection.
[Report This]Date: April 24 2014 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
Incredible chapter, I'm a big fan. Just would love to see Anne abuse her son a little more as the story develops but I love it.
Date: April 24 2014 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ok so you could make it so that his mother tells Margaret to take care of Luke while she goes to the toy store and buys a toy bed along with a bunch of other things to help him adapt to his condition. Margaret starts to tease Luke, though she always watches out so he doesnt get hurt and watches tv with him stuck in her cleavage, because she wants to tease him while also comforting him. He then falls asleep in there after struggling and margaret decides that from now on she will make him stay with her and put him there whenever she can
[Report This]Date: April 23 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
Incredible start. PLEASE don't let this die.
[Report This]Date: April 23 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well I like the way you're taking your time to put all things giving the scene-setting.
Perhaps now you could write about how Margaret is gonna do some fart torture on her little brother... like farting on the pillow he sleeps etc etc ETC!!
[Report This]Date: April 23 2014 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
Another great chapter! The setting was set beautifully to allow many possibilites for upcoming chapters.
As for suggestions, you already seen what I wanted from my past review which you enjoyed. However, you are receiving so many suggestions that it may be hard to choose.
To help you out, maybe you could combine what Wizard and Rygar said. Have a bit of insertion with a lot of involvement with the undergarments. The mother could 'protect' Luke by using her bra, or even better, her panties as protection from the world and maybe the insertion could happen by accident becuase of Anne's irresistable arrousal of Luke's presence in her panties.
Or if you really liked my idea from my first review that would be perfect. You could add what Rygar said about the sister using her bra to trap Luke, but then Margaret notices Luke staring at Anne and Margaret is jealous. She ties and gags him up and secretly puts Luke on Anne's panties in her panty drawer which then Anne has an unaware moment and Anne puts on the panties with Luke inside it, and Anne feels a soft bump and rubs herself, and then you could add what Wizard said and Anne accidently inserts Luke inside her in the process of Anne ready for an orgasm.
Lots of possibilites my friend!
[Report This]Date: April 23 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great story! Expect soon to continue
[Report This]Date: April 23 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
Nice! You definitely have found your calling.. Sir! Can't wait to see where you take us with this tale of twists. ;`)